Re: Re: Drifting

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AKnursewriter
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Very pleasant and an easy read.
My favorite stanza:
It’s sheets not made for me to sleep
devoted to the wind they keep
unfurling them to billow fast
I trim them to my clanking mast

Thanks for another good one, Lisa!