Re: Re: Dreams of War (latest rewrite, I think I may be done.)

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b00kw3rm
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There are some deep thoughts here.. Making me contemplate war and sensuality… Contemplating, Hmmm…. I wonder though, is it the theme of war, or is it the theme of domination and submission? What is making that monkey in the brain tick? What is it dreaming of? Glory, winning, titles, possessions… does it really want bloodshed, or is that the result of some of the other innate instincts? The effect?