Re: Re: Dreams of War (latest rewrite, I think I may be done.)

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Bruce
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Kevin,
What can I say? Wow! I don’t agree with your take on war,
but I like the way you write about it.

A possible typo/spellling error? Her ebon hair, emerald eyes, (did you mean ebony?)

Elizabeth