Re: Re: death in a conffessional – excerpt

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phoenixgirl
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Thanks for the critque. The story centers around priest molestation that protagonist comes to grips with. Haven’t completed the whole thing but this excerpt is his key part where he confronts clergy, the church and himsef. It’s necessaritly harsh but there’s no way to sugarcoat it.