Re: Re: Death and Coffee Home › Forums › Critique Central › Poetry › Removed › Re: Re: Death and Coffee October 4, 2009 at 1:30 am #350276 Mary JoParticipant Uhmmm what’s the word . . . Oh Yeah! NEATO! I know that’s not really technical or anything but that was a really cool read. Good pace, rythm, and rhyme scheme. Great job.