Re: Re: Dance With Me

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paris1929
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Weighed now with other things
footsteps heavy with care
we dance each one alone
a song and a dream
apart we now share

Just an opinion of mine. You know my rhyming butt!!!LOL. Very nice poem. I enjoyed the read, thanks.
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