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Wow, that’s some Monday morning commute Bob. I love the feel of this. It makes you want to punch the horn:) My favorite line: cynics in Civics dragging you backwards (I could write a whole opera on that one). The last four stanzas are in my humble estimation brilliant, the last three exceptional. Seventeen words that sum up life and death today.

I fully enjoyed this one.
PS And the reminder of Bowie’s music made me want to put on my red shoes and dance:)