Re: RE: Chromativore

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tijuanasmellsgood
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I liked your use of color which made things extremely vivid. My only quibble would be that perhaps you heaped on too much cream! I think if your poem were toned down the images would be even stronger. I recently read a critic who commented that a good poem can stand if there is just one good knock-out image in it. If you notice, the best of writers use restraint, which is really much harder than piling things on.

janet