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DCapone
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Funny. I think this can be expanded a bit more, however. Right now it flashes by too quickly.

P.S. Have you seen Open Season 2 (yes, I’m aware it’s a cartoon, but it’s still funny)? There is this fluffy poodle (?) in it who is supposedly the “bad guy”. He wears a bow. It’s really hard to take him seriously. And this, when it opened up, really reminded me of that. I would recommend watching it, just for some pointers on this story. 🙂