Re: Re: Camping, a Grannie’s Gravy story – 806 words, including recipe

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eugene
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Great stories about camping, I could taste the fish and imagine my days of fishing as a child. I love the alka-seltzer part, I remember that song vividly. I do agree that some of the paragraphs could use some rearranging so that they make sense and are related to each other, and not random thoughts. I look forward to more granny stories! Maybe explain the title?