Re: Re: Beginnings of my book…would anyone keep reading?

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benedictus
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Thanks Neets for all the time you put into your reply. 🙂
I enjoyed reading it and am ready to start working on my writing again…lol.
Thanks so much!
P.S: You are Bang on the mark about all the trains leaving the station at the same time and I have to say I’m never really on board either – and my husband actually gives me grief for this ALOT! lol! Always going off on tangents and giving too much info…I guess I like to paint the full picture….hahaha! How funny!