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Rae19
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I really enjoyed it. I kinda lost interest in the middle. The relationship between husband and wife was entertaining. The banter, her sarcasm nailed it on the head about military men wanting to be babied. I would buy it because I could relate…like a secret code of the military. Civilians dont get it. So ju