Re: Re: Beginning of a thriller – need feedback

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Cinci Kim
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Unabashedliar,
I don’t really have any critique to add. I just wanted to say that I suffer from the exact same habit as Alecia Avery: I bite my fingers into raw, bloody mutilations. I’m not proud of this, and I try all the time to stop and most of the time I do it almost unconsciously, but I just wanted to say that I found it strangely amusing to read about my own fault. You did a very good job on writing about it.