Re: Re: Beginner’s question on 3rd person limited POV

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jennifernobile
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I recognize your dilemma having just written a memoir beginning with experience I had as a 4-5 year old. I have no problem accepting the shift into adult vocabulary in your example. The only confusion I have is with “he imagined a lion eating him.” Seems like it should be “eating them,” referring to the bullies.