It looks like we’re getting to understand each other better, ricky.
Re: There have been few suggestions regarding ‘Venus’, people seem to like it, but many regarding changes that need to be made in ‘Baby Shoes’ to turn it into a real story. Two or three of those changes have been mentioned here, and I’m in the process
of rewriting the story.
Rewrite your story, then repost. We would be interested to see your changes. Honestly.