Re: Re: Autumn’s Fall

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giddingsgang
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thought this would be about autumn and there are all kinds of seasons –
think you can make stronger is there is a tighter focus – you have lots of images to select from like: “dark silhouettes of “several bare trees,
Which to their spindly and far high limbs, there clings a few small yellow leaves.” –