Re: Re: Autumn

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Stick to the second one: “Autumn afternoon/crisp gentle breeze kisses trees/soft leaf drifts away (now it is just right:) I see Amy did a really good job in helping you squeeze it even tighter. Was this a class assignment too? If so, hope you made the grade.