Writing?maybe!! – 2009-09-10 5:30 PM
gentle breeze kisses the tree (not sure if I should say tree or tree’s)
a leaf drifts away
ehh…tell me what you guys think.
gentle breeze kisses the tree’s
soft leaf drifts away
I couldn’t really figure out what to do with the a because I’m trying to stick to a traditional Haiku, and most my preferable options would give it to many syllables. What do you guys think of calling it soft instead?