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AKnursewriter
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Olivia,
I found this very interesting and intriguing. It’s really quite good, mainly because it is so creative and off the beaten path. It doesn’t get all wrapped up in the end with a fake and sappy conclusion (although I do like sappy sometimes). It is just very real and honest. I like this the best so far of all that I’ve seen you post. Whatever your inspiration was for this poem, it provided you with good material. Congratulations.