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barb schmeling

Lord Terpsichorean – 2009-03-22 4:49 PM under matin sun to groggy lea wispy umbrellas glide on whispers heralding white dandelions’ roar they gently bite her dewy tongue, a promised kiss sodden with nectar— dripping— before the shower YVNIII 3/23/09


Hey York, I get hungry reading about dandelion greens. They are so good with bacon drippings

and onions,  and cornbread of course, yum, yummy! Now I will need to go searching for those little pearls. I enjoyed the read very much. It’s real springy. 🙂