Re: Re: 2 Minutes Till Summer

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FaithW.Albrecht
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You know I think you’re right, maybe just have the repeated verbs twice instead of having to have it there every stanza I like that thanks. I get stuck on a formula for a poem and think it has to be throughout. I guess it is definitely the wrong time of the year 🙂 I was flippin’ channels and passed a shot of a kid sitting and staring the clock. thanks I’ll work on this and repost it around the spring 🙂