Re: Re: 2 Minutes Till Summer

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barb schmeling
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🙂 I agree with Shonte’, the words over and over are a bit much. But it does get the point across and I suppose looking back it would have been easier to understand had we not been on the brink of Fall. Thanks for sharing and keeping writing, maybe tighten it up some and drop a few of the repeated words. But keep writing. 🙂