Re: Re: 2 Minutes Till Summer

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FaithW.Albrecht
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Thanks for reading Rach. I get what you’re saying about using the word boredom, I was trying to think of something to use that could be doing all the things the kids were waiting to do when the bell rang. That’s the reason for the second line, it’s like they’re thinking, “as soon as the bell rings I’m going to dance, run, dash…”etc It’s kinda like a refrain. I think you’re right about the age group, fourth or fifth grade, maybe fifth grade because that summer’s bell means so much. I used to be a teacher and I think we all sit there at two minutes till summer trying not to jump around and dance as well 🙂

KM