Re: Music on the Wind

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Hmm I don’t know what to say, I was inspired by a late afternoon zephyr, but don’t ususally share the little poems I write.  What do you think?

The wind blows and the leaves applaud

Whipping the willows and blowing the birch

Their branches dance and bow bending in courtesy


Wind’s music taps the twigs and shakes the sticks

Round and round they sashay and dip these joyous trees

Until at last wind becomes breeze and those leaves wave their goodbyes