Re: Mislead

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paris1929
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Stepping carelessly along without knowledge of being mislead. Pain and hurt is unkown to the mind until it taste something never fed. Awakens a part of the body that until now slept an infinite safe and secure slumber. The curiosity to want to lift the now not so heavy barrier to see what lie under. Unawarness and innocence , though , beautiful for one to have within, criple a mind to withstand deception once uncovered. Stepping carelessly along feeling hurt and pain searching for purpose and answers not easily discovered. Wounded from uncaring,heartless actions made by the feeding of a cruel and unhappy soul. Pieces among pieces have been unfortunately taken but not yet the whole. With the undesirable knowledge of two different ways of thinking an overpowering pull in the opposite direction is made. A once strong influential source now has less knowledge and is powerless and afraid.