Re: Man Eating Door

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rawpowergirl
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Who was to know?
It was a dang carnivore.
Disposal was its fate.
That vicious storm door

Had an appetite, and
Chomped a mouthful from
Leg of Lyn, then belched,
And licked its chops.

No exaggerating here! It took a big bite. Thank God I’m not on blood thinners. That door better consider itself lucky, because I didn’t bite it back.