Re: Effaced

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jbdoyle55
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With a royal crown of love, a boy became a king,
king to her heart and soul,
a man of purpose
a man with direction
a man
a man who…loses himself with every
flutter of her eyelashes
every
teardrop on her cheek
every
cry in the darkness
a man who
has become infused
indistinct
…of
her
dreams.
He has become more of her wants
and less of his own.
He is a man
effaced.