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Eightball8018
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Ok here I go again. I have read all the articles suggested and changed a lot. Please review and let me know if I should go back yet again to the drawing board.

Dear

I chose to submit my 80,000 word romance novel STICKY SITUATIONS to you because it is similar to by , and I think my work will suit similar readers.

STICKY SITUATIONS is set in the suburbs of Chicago. Four friends become engulfed in a maze of secrets and betrayal. When things start to unravel, pandemonium penetrates their friendships, relationships are ruined, and lives are put in danger. When Dana is subjected to a brutal attack, she relies on the support of her friends. She finds out quickly they aren’t the friends she thought they were. During one of their gatherings secrets are revealed and lives are broken. Will keeping up with the secrets and lies become more than their friendships can endure.

I’d be happy to send you the first three chapters or the complete copy of the manuscript for your review. Thank you for your time and I look forward to hearing from you

Sincerely

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