Re: Character dilemma

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axlsweetchild
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I have a slight problem with an ending.

I have finally written a short with one problem, I can’t write the end. One of the characters is supposed to die but he keeps pleading his case to live. The character who’s supposed to kill him saves him first but now she is supposed to kill him. She really doesn’t want to do it and he really doesn’t want to die.

Of course writing this I came up with an idea.

Instead of being sent to save him she could have been sent to kill him and winds up letting him live.

Sorry, its not a spy story just paranormal fiction.

What do y’all think?

Cheryl