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To Be Mortal And Immortal

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To Be Mortal And Immortal

Postby roda havet » Thu Apr 30, 2015 2:13 pm

Just thought I would see how others would respond to this poem before making a final decision to put it in my book. Any type of feedback is welcome negative or positive.

To Be Mortal And Immortal

We are born mortal into this world,
Living our lives to the fullest.
And somewhat doing as we may.
Seeing things for what we may.
Trying to leave a mark on earth.
Yet, when we die we’re not all remembered.
Though being immortal we would live forever.
Walking the lands for eternity.
Seeing things in a different light.
Living on knowing you may never die.
Doing as you wish at anytime.
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Re: To Be Mortal And Immoral

Postby roshedwardd » Thu May 14, 2015 3:24 am

"earthly love has power to make
Men's being mortal, immortal"

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Re: To Be Mortal And Immoral

Postby roda havet » Fri May 15, 2015 6:59 am

May I ask where that quote came from? I like that wish I could have thought of something like it for my poem.
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Re: To Be Mortal And Immoral

Postby CreativeHeart75 » Mon Apr 03, 2017 3:38 pm

This was very nice. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it. I hope you put it into your book. It would be a good choice in my opinion. :)

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Re: To Be Mortal And Immoral

Postby roda havet » Fri Apr 07, 2017 7:09 am

[color=#00BF00]Dream to live, live to dream, and write to love, love to write![/color]

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Re: To Be Mortal And Immoral

Postby Oldtimer » Fri Apr 07, 2017 1:52 pm

It looks as if you left a 't' out of your title, Roda. I expected something a little more risqué. :mrgreen:
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Re: To Be Mortal And Immoral

Postby roda havet » Sat Apr 08, 2017 7:03 am

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