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The Kingdom of The Mountains and The Misty Valley

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The Kingdom of The Mountains and The Misty Valley

Postby Biscuit » Mon Nov 24, 2014 8:57 pm

There was a fondness in noise not often considered
a common goal that existed between us
that longing of my escape from the echoes of the misty valley.
A noise that is formless, ceaseless and endless in fog.

A fog that lies on a precipice
under the gaze of the kingdom of mountains and cities
deeply entwined with memories
once cherished and long forgotten.
I often try to recall the misty valley
to feel her moss under my toes once more.

The noise was once a din
to the kingdom of my mountains it calls
once a cry, now a whisper
that softly breaches my walls.

Yet I recoil from its touch
as a child once stung
and too afraid to leap, for
The pain was already done.

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If anyone else has dealt with depression, I'd imagine some might've experienced the fog that comes with it. It's a strange thing in my mind that I've always contemplated about but seldom dedicate the time to actually write of my own experiences. As I'm dealing with delirium and sore throats I figured I'd might as well make use for the tiny muse whispering ideas into my head.

Hmmm I'm too contemplative tonight.

Emily.

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Re: The Kingdom of The Mountains and The Misty Valley

Postby Ms Wright » Fri Mar 20, 2015 11:21 am


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Re: The Kingdom of The Mountains and The Misty Valley

Postby madoperk » Mon Jun 22, 2015 8:50 pm

That's a great poem. Thanks.

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Re: The Kingdom of The Mountains and The Misty Valley

Postby roda havet » Sun Jun 28, 2015 9:00 am

This is a nice poem with very good imagery. I haven't dealt with depression before but I find poetry a great way to express ones self. :)
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