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ThinkTink
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Newbie to WD & to writing

Postby ThinkTink » Wed Jan 31, 2018 12:03 pm

Hi! I'm a lifelong lover of books and have recently caught the writing bug. I'm hoping to bounce some ideas off of you all and give my humble opinions if I can help anyone else.

Still trying to figure out how all these forums work, so this may be misplaced in this Introductions section. But I am looking for critiques of the hook of a young adult novel I'm working on:

"In rural West Virginia, 17 year-old Ariel struggles with the loss of her parents while evil forces battle for her soul and a brooding winged stranger claims her heart."

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Re: Newbie to WD & to writing

Postby T.A.Rodgers » Thu Feb 01, 2018 9:01 am

Welcome to the forums.


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