Am i ok?

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Eggy
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Am i ok?

Postby Eggy » Sat Apr 22, 2006 11:18 pm


Eggy
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Am i ok?

Postby Eggy » Sat Apr 22, 2006 11:18 pm

Hi, i like writing and like to try say informative stuff but also being interesting and funny. I just wanna know do i seem ok, i have a few things i have written here.

http://p2.forumforfree.com/the-daily-pr ... ackup.html

Any feedback would be good.

Thanks
:)

entropy_happens
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RE: Am i ok?

Postby entropy_happens » Sun Apr 23, 2006 3:38 pm

Well, from what I can tell, you're not a bad storyteller! You might want to work on grammar though. Best of luck to you, and welcome to the forum!
Godspeed,
Lynne

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RE: Am i ok?

Postby Miggy » Wed Apr 26, 2006 4:17 pm

The link took me to a forum. I didn't find any stories!

Miggy, the Thief


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