How to describe this action?

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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby jaus tail » Tue May 21, 2013 3:54 am

you remind me of a girl who used to live in her neighborhood. she forgot to do her homework and hid herself in the bathroom. turns out everyone left the house, and she's still stuck in the bathroom for 40 years...sometimes at night, we hear a crying voice, and a thumping of the door, begging to let her out.
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby Anya Kylash » Tue May 21, 2013 8:41 am

So I'll be stuck in a bathroom for forty years because I killed you? That's a little harsh.
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby jaus tail » Tue May 21, 2013 9:52 am

its harsh for the bathroom that it has to bear you

tell me anya, when you look at a mirror, does the mirror crack,

when you look at your reflection in the river, does the river go dry

when you look out the window to catch some breeze, does the wind change its direction

p.s. close the blinds(what is this phrase called, to put the curtains?)
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby Anya Kylash » Tue May 21, 2013 4:09 pm

Actually, I'd assume a bathroom loved me if it kept me for forty years.

And mirrors actually sparkle and clean themselves when I look in them.

Rivers swell and flow when I look at my reflection, almost in pride.

And wind always wants to rush around me, almost gasping.

P.S. You might want to see if your own questions apply to yourself
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby jaus tail » Tue May 21, 2013 9:58 pm

why so angry..
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby Anya Kylash » Tue May 21, 2013 10:01 pm

No offense -btw, about to be offensive-, but you seem to be the one taking the offensive on this matter.
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby jaus tail » Tue May 21, 2013 10:05 pm

i'm not getting this...are you angry or am i angry cause i think your upset but i'm not upset..if your upset then sorry but i'm not upset..i would be upset if your upset
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby Anya Kylash » Wed May 22, 2013 9:07 am

:lol:
Now I'm cunfuzzled!
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby jaus tail » Wed May 22, 2013 10:32 am

Thats when i used the callinghan fire and boom. Anya has been defeated.
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby Anya Kylash » Wed May 22, 2013 12:50 pm

Confused doesn't mean weak. I just don't have a plan.

And doesn't that scare you to death?

As stated, fire person. Heat doesn't hurt me. *redirects fire directly at Jaus*
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