How to describe this action?

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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby jaus tail » Sun May 19, 2013 11:31 pm

my sympathies with thy family 8-)

t'was nice talking with thy deux femmes..
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby rosebud » Sun May 19, 2013 11:41 pm

Play nice now or our jolly party will get booted out. Let's get back to creative writing or call it a day and begin anew on the morrow with a new and more exciting story.

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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby jaus tail » Sun May 19, 2013 11:47 pm

it would be night in your part of the town now, with the giant garoyles patrolling the streets for any thug in action. i would stay indoors. rumor has it a sociopath has escaped arkham prison
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby Anya Kylash » Sun May 19, 2013 11:50 pm

*sobs in corner*

*sends skeleton army to attack Jaus*

*takes vindictive control over the known world*
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby jaus tail » Mon May 20, 2013 12:09 am

sits on throne, raises hands in prayer, looks at sky, heavy rain, washes down her tonnes of make up from her face

the make up ends up in river and being toxic and radioactive causes mutation in acquatic life...now fish have hands and octopii have two noses and sharks have crab like claws

without makeup no one recognizes anya, her army laughs at her, she runs away in another town with new make up
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby Anya Kylash » Mon May 20, 2013 8:35 am

Falacy.

I NEVER wear makeup. I think, personally, painting your face every morning is disgusting.
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Forgotten -100k words
Friends and Foes -113k words

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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby jaus tail » Mon May 20, 2013 11:24 am

then let me do the honor..i'll happily do some abstract art on your face . a red nose, a check board cheek, a black eye patch and youd be the new scarecrow in town..
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby Anya Kylash » Mon May 20, 2013 4:24 pm

Unfortunately, while you're busy applying cosmetics, I knife you in the heart.

*winner*
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Loyalties Lost -121k words
Forgotten -100k words
Friends and Foes -113k words

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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby jaus tail » Mon May 20, 2013 9:47 pm

i'll return as a ghost and haunt you
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Re: How to describe this action?

Postby Anya Kylash » Mon May 20, 2013 9:53 pm

I've already got so many. What's one more?
Finished:
Race Against Fate -101k words
Loyalties Lost -121k words
Forgotten -100k words
Friends and Foes -113k words

Unfinished:
Alone - 32k words

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