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What is your opinion on this statement?

PostPosted: Mon Dec 26, 2016 9:53 am
by Steve4848

Re: What is your opinion on this statement?

PostPosted: Mon Dec 26, 2016 10:55 am
by shadowwalker
It should be "develop", not "development". Otherwise, pretty basic concept. You don't include sentences that don't have any purpose.

Re: What is your opinion on this statement?

PostPosted: Mon Dec 26, 2016 12:30 pm
by Steve4848
Thanks for the reply and the advice.

I can think of plot, character, and environment development as main categories that possibly contain sub categories, for example character development between characters.

Can you think of any other development categories?

Re: What is your opinion on this statement?

PostPosted: Mon Dec 26, 2016 5:03 pm
by robjvargas
I frequently tell writers around me that story is the CEO, President, Prime Minister, King, Queen, Emperor, and Empress of writing.

Think about the movie Suicide Squad. One of the complaints I saw about the movie (and I agree for the most part), is that it spent too long telling us how the individual characters came to be. Now think about a related film, Batman v. Superman. How much time was spent getting to "understand" (develop, if you will) Wonder Woman? Yet most people around me say that her appearance in the movie was its brightest spot.

Keep the story moving, keep the reader in the story. Let the story tell us who the characters are. Let it develop the scene, the characters, and so on.

Sentences can have purpose, yet not advance the story. No "rule" of writing lacks for exceptions, but generally, if it doesn't move the story, there's an opportunity for editing right there.

Re: What is your opinion on this statement?

PostPosted: Mon Dec 26, 2016 5:40 pm
by Steve4848
If a reader can tell whether a sentence was written for plot, character, or environment development then there should be a way for a language model to determine that also.

I'm creating categories so a language model can parse the sentences into them.

I understand what you are saying about the over development. If I parse thousands of stories eventually common correlations will appear, things that will separate the well developed from the not so well developed.

Re: What is your opinion on this statement?

PostPosted: Mon Dec 26, 2016 8:24 pm
by robjvargas

Re: What is your opinion on this statement?

PostPosted: Mon Dec 26, 2016 8:37 pm
by shadowwalker
I agree with rob. I mean, the more stories you put into your program, the more generalized the results are going to be, because different stories appeal to different readers for different reasons at different times. You're more likely to end up with generic bland instead of "well developed" storytelling.

Re: What is your opinion on this statement?

PostPosted: Mon Dec 26, 2016 10:51 pm
by Steve4848

Re: What is your opinion on this statement?

PostPosted: Tue Dec 27, 2016 9:38 am
by Steve4848
Just curious what profession involve these established successful practitioners, recognized by authorities that you speak of? Would it be professional writers, linguistics specialists or more like English teachers?

Re: What is your opinion on this statement?

PostPosted: Tue Dec 27, 2016 10:18 am
by shadowwalker
I guess my confusion is and continues to be the purpose of doing this. Fiction is a creative thing, and while there are basic "requirements" for good writing (knowing grammar rules well enough to communicate your thoughts, for example), the quality of any work depends on the eye of the beholder. Some readers may like the story but find the writing difficult to follow; others may find the technique masterful, but the story dull. Still others will find nothing of value in the work while others rave about it. Add in the different genres and reader expectations for them, and stories that cross genres and combine techniques of each.

There is a reason for these different opinions - every writer writes differently and for different audiences. In the end, unless you write separate programs for specific types of stories, I can't see that you will end up with anything more than, as I said, generic bland. "A well developed story has a beginning, a middle, and an end." - which is something we already know, and thus adds nothing for the writer.