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Dialog question

PostPosted: Mon Feb 01, 2016 8:04 pm
by tkdubb
I made an oops and posted this in a different thread at first. As I said in that thread, newbie alert, watch your heads.
So, I have been doing some browsing and read that when writers use anything other than "said for dialog, it drives the person reading it crazy and makes for a long read.
So my question is, is it ever ok to us "replied/s", "ask/ed", or "says"?
If it is ok, when is it appropriate, and how often can it be used before it becomes annoying?

Re: Dialog question

PostPosted: Mon Feb 01, 2016 8:34 pm
by kamalayka
"He/She said" is the most common tag because it's invisible. Other ones are ok if used sparingly and necessarily. I see it all the time in fiction.

However, I've always thought "he/she asked" was redundant. If a question is being asked, isn't it obvious?

Just don't do this:

"I'm scared," John shakily mumbled.

(That only works for Philip K Dick. In The Simulacrum, he had a character "squishily squish in the mud," or something like that.")

Re: Dialog question

PostPosted: Mon Feb 01, 2016 10:07 pm
by pls

Re: Dialog question

PostPosted: Tue Feb 02, 2016 2:58 pm
by James A. Ritchie
When only two people are in a conversation, you rarely need any tag at all. Just use one often enough to allow the reader to know which one is speaking.

When more people are in a conversation, you still don't need to use a tag each time. You can introduce the character using action or description, or by simply writing something like, Ron paused before speaking.

When you do need a tag for identification, or just for rhythm, it's almost always best to use "said". There's very seldom a reason not to do so.

As always, pick up a novel by your favorite writer. Read it and count how many times he or she uses a tag other than "said".

Re: Dialog question

PostPosted: Tue Feb 02, 2016 4:21 pm
by shadowwalker
I typically go with "said" or no tag. I will use a different tag to get the right nuance if the context is ambiguous, but I try to steer clear of that whenever possible (without leading the reader by the nose).

Re: Dialog question

PostPosted: Tue Feb 02, 2016 11:58 pm
by DrG2
When I tag, I mostly use "said." I will use "asked," because: "How old are you?" said John. looks odd to me. I never use a replied or a synonym, because that it always obvious.

Re: Dialog question

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2016 6:18 pm
by OneBlindEye
I find this dialogue very interesting as a novice writer!
I have noticed this in a lot of the stories and books on writing that I have read.
In my first manuscript I have tagged the lines in my writing with something other than said/asked/replied when I want to make sure the reader knows the character's precise feeling or state of mind. Out of nearly 20 readers thus far none have commented on the tagging.

Re: Dialog question

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2016 9:00 pm
by onceuponwednesday

Re: Dialog question

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2016 9:25 pm
by James A. Ritchie

Re: Dialog question

PostPosted: Fri Feb 12, 2016 1:25 pm
by RonnaJG