Mountain Monastery

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Sonya Ki
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Mountain Monastery

Postby Sonya Ki » Sat Aug 09, 2014 11:18 pm

Radiance of Your ketheric kiss
is all i have left....
sleepless i pace through
the long snowbound polar night
listen to the wolf's forlorn howl
and a woman weeping in the nether-lands
this abominable separation!
tracking Your crystal footprints
with my heart
Hari!
can you not hear the Soul's lament
sighing over remote, frostbitten blue trails
that lead nowhere if You are not present
Companion of Heaven!
when will You visit my tent again?

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Re: Mountain Monastery

Postby cosivantutte » Mon Sep 08, 2014 9:38 pm

I like this. It's like a tragic tale waiting to be told. Or the ending of one.

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Re: Mountain Monastery

Postby Storylover02 » Wed Sep 10, 2014 3:39 pm

It's beautifully written! And you have really great imagery!

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Re: Mountain Monastery

Postby carrie99 » Sat Sep 13, 2014 9:10 pm

Oh how beautifully tragic...I am instantly transported...and now I am cold!!!

Thank you,
Carrie


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