Heart Kiss

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Sonya Ki
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Heart Kiss

Postby Sonya Ki » Wed Mar 19, 2014 9:54 pm

Will you kiss my heart tonight Lord?
And make me bloom lushly
like the lotus moon rising over
a barren and lifeless desert

how I languish in the scattered funeral
petals of another orphaned day
seeking only Your radiance and
those luminous orbs that dance
around the sun forever

Who can love me like You—God?
robed in a long dark dream
I wait in the orange embers
of Your Presence
for the only caress that
really matters
the only kiss
that truly endures

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Re: Heart Kiss

Postby max2011 » Fri Mar 28, 2014 11:17 am

I like the way you end this piece. Good!

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Re: Heart Kiss

Postby Sonya Ki » Fri Mar 28, 2014 11:22 pm

Thanks Max


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