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A greeting and a poem

PostPosted: Wed Feb 12, 2014 11:58 am
by Aetherwolf
I have recently found this site. I was told by a friend that I should pursue my poetry as a craft instead of a hobby
So I extend greetings to all the poets here and hope to count myself among your number.
I have enjoyed reading others work here.
In return I will share some of mine.

Daybreak

Cast forth the sparks of memory
Within the silhouette of dreams
To light the path the spirits walk
From mother earth to worlds unseen

Spin forth the mind O restless heart
Astride the rays of rising dawn
From deepest dark to golden light
To find the path to travel on

A peaceful time the birth of day
From night ruled by the silver moon
In neither one may we long stay
Time moves us forward far too soon.

Re: A greeting and a poem

PostPosted: Wed Feb 12, 2014 5:17 pm
by max2011
Welcome! Great poetry!

Re: A greeting and a poem

PostPosted: Wed Jun 04, 2014 12:20 pm
by Storylover02
I really like this. You have a great vocabulary without overdoing it, and I really like the rhyme!

Re: A greeting and a poem

PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2014 4:44 pm
by Billie Bowman Daddario
I really like the rhythm of the poem and the imagery. I kind of got lost at the end. I think it could have stronger imagery at the end.

Re: A greeting and a poem

PostPosted: Mon Aug 11, 2014 9:32 pm
by offsetemily
This is gorgeous!

Yes, publish your poems. You have a clear and mature voice.

Re: A greeting and a poem

PostPosted: Tue Nov 04, 2014 12:03 pm
by cacheempty

Re: A greeting and a poem

PostPosted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 11:39 pm
by kdaniel171
Such a nice poetry, the use of vocabulary, phrases and everything is amazing. You should keep on writing such a wonderful poetry.

Re: A greeting and a poem

PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2015 10:01 am
by madoperk
That's really wonderful poetry, the rhyme is excellent you should keep going.

Re: A greeting and a poem

PostPosted: Tue May 19, 2015 11:08 am
by roda havet
Wow! That is a great poem thank you for sharing it with all of us. Hope to read some more of your poetry. :)

Re: A greeting and a poem

PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2017 3:31 pm
by CreativeHeart75
This was great! I love the rhymes. :)