numbers promt

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numbers promt

Postby foodpoet » Fri Dec 14, 2012 8:17 am

can't seem to post - last month it was post slower now I post and poof but if I post again it says its posted ?? anyone else - I think so since the number is staying the same so heres my numbers poems:


Schedule the day only to have
Calls interrupt the plan
Hello do this now
Echoes as the number of complaints grow
Do this now why isn’t your regular work done
Until you hold a useless schedule
Numbers eroding time
We dance around issues.

The dance of computer bindary code revolves
Around the room.
Swirling codes are absorbed in the spin
of digits - it’s a day off after all
when the computer crashes numbers silent.

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Re: numbers promt

Postby jpartin » Sun Feb 03, 2013 8:51 pm

I liked it showed how busy life has become these day and the important things are lost. Well done. :D

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Re: numbers promt

Postby KnightWriter » Wed Mar 06, 2013 1:06 pm

I was considering writing a piece about how mundane the 1/3 of our lives is and how we're just an unacknowledged...if that is a real word mind you, as part of the whole picture. Crazy awesome man! Keep on!!! :D

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