If I Had The Moon

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cosi van tutte
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If I Had The Moon

Postby cosi van tutte » Wed Mar 25, 2015 9:18 pm

If I had the moon
in my hand,
I would dust the dust away.
And the old moon
Would be a new moon.
Sleek silver.
Clean copper.
Glitten gold.

If I had the moon
in my hand,
So new
So bright
I would hold it tight.
I would keep it safe.
I would hide it away.

And it would be my treasure.
And it would be my delight.

If I had the moon
in my hand,
I would put it in a box
Of silver.
Of copper.
Of gold.

Till my love comes.

And I would share
My sleek moon
My clean moon
My glitten moon
With only him.

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Re: If I Had The Moon

Postby roda havet » Wed May 20, 2015 6:22 pm

I really like your poem. This is very nice and I can see it being recited as I read it to myself. :)
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Re: If I Had The Moon

Postby cosi van tutte » Wed May 20, 2015 11:10 pm

Thanks, roda!

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Re: If I Had The Moon

Postby roda havet » Thu May 21, 2015 7:18 am

You are very welcome! :D
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