Songs poems and the preference toward rhyming

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Songs poems and the preference toward rhyming

Postby MisterMitchell » Sun Nov 26, 2017 8:41 am

I enjoy rhymes that are creative and have employed rhymes in any poem or song that I have written.

What is your preference? Do you prefer perfectly metered rhyming or a more open rhyming style? Do you like poetry that doesn't rhyme at all?

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Re: Songs poems and the preference toward rhyming

Postby ostarella » Sun Nov 26, 2017 10:34 am

I confess I'm a "traditionalist" when it comes to poetry. I detest poetry that just seems like a bunch of almost rambling sentences about some obscure subject. The appeal of poetry to me is that rhythm and rhyme. I like poetry that's like a song versus an essay.

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Re: Songs poems and the preference toward rhyming

Postby MisterMitchell » Sun Nov 26, 2017 12:21 pm

I also enjoy the myriad ways rhymes can be used for artistic flair. Poetry is one area I feel somewhat confident and mainly because I've always looked at my poetry as strictly for fun and created quickly. I'll wax poetic now simply because I'm a little excited to be in communication with a human that seems normal!

"Ostarella is not a bot"

The internet is quite the spot
with pretend people spouting rot,
you'd think they're real but no they're not,
they exist to disrupt kind discourse and thought.
To show my excitement I thought that I'd jot
a quick little rhyme though the internet's fraught
with critics and nasties. (there are quite a lot)
Your nice little comment, it wasn't for naught
it showed human behavior I thought I'd forgot
I shout "Hooray, osterella is not a bot!"

That was fun, thanks for replying!

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Re: Songs poems and the preference toward rhyming

Postby ostarella » Sun Nov 26, 2017 12:36 pm

LOL - thumb's up! :D

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Re: Songs poems and the preference toward rhyming

Postby wdarcy » Sun Nov 26, 2017 1:06 pm

Hey, that's great! And so true!

I am also a traditionalist--I like rhymes and meters. On the other hand, e. e. cummings is the man!

--Warren
"Wagner's 'Das Rheingold'" (Oxford 1993). Winner of the Society for Music Theory's Wallace Berry Award, 1995.

"Elements of Sonata Theory" co-authored with James Hepokoski(Oxford 2006). Winner of the Society for Music Theory's Wallace Berry Award, 2008.

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Re: Songs poems and the preference toward rhyming

Postby MisterMitchell » Sun Nov 26, 2017 1:26 pm

I feel inspired!

"My Brothers and Sisters"

I've wondered for years why the colors and places engage our large family in war
We all are related it's so plain to see and we've known this since two thousand more!
Now brothers and sisters fight husband and wife. Mothers and fathers deal out grief and strife,
to what end? The scars this creates last for life and the group is dissected as if with a knife.
Who's exploited us all? Are we destined to fall? Who can shoulder this yoke? Is this all a big joke?

No.

The truth is apparent to me as I ponder,
my brothers and sisters long quest for our peace,
to succeed I must fill my own heart with love,
and when I'm with you loved ones I'll simply release.

Peace.

Mr Mitchell Nov 26, 2017

I like it! But I'm biased! What do you think?


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