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WriterHath
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To all to read and comment!

Postby WriterHath » Tue Jul 14, 2009 11:37 am


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To all to read and comment!

Postby WriterHath » Tue Jul 14, 2009 11:37 am

They waited at a corner bench of the train station under a shadow covered by the overhead roof. Ally sat in a chair reading The Daily Article, listening to the singing birds that flew by. The day was young, while the train was in sight and rode on by the train tracks. People lined up in front of the train giving their tickets to the ticket holder. Jamie and Ally stayed a pew waiting for the other passengers to go on.
“Let’s go honey,” said the husband. They started up the path to the train readying their tickets. Ally carried a rucksack and one suitcase, Jamie comprised himself of only a hiking backpack, with a canteen filled with Dania water. They handed the tickets to the man and got on the train. “Where should we sit?”Ally asked. “How ‘bout over there by the old man and child!” The husband and wife trailed the sits, going through a roar of children. They sat parallel from each other one facing the other.
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Re: To all to read and comment!

Postby mammamaia » Tue Jul 14, 2009 12:58 pm

i'm confused... what is this meant to be?... and why is it in the section meant for discussing the places where we do our writing?

i think you should probably ask a moderator to move this down in the critique section...


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