"Do you love every comment your critique partners have made? Do you have to make every change they've suggested?"

Critique groups. Sometimes a source of brilliant feedback, and sometimes, well, a source of literary torture. Once you get your material workshopped and head home, how do you sort through the ink-scrawled suggestions and find some clarity, or at least avoid a brutal internal battle? It’s the latest from Promptly’s Top 20 Tips From WD in 2010 series (the quote-worthy quips that branded themselves in my mind when we were creating these magazines throughout the year). A regular prompt follows.

No. 11: Critique Conundrums
Do you love every comment your critique partners have made? I doubt it. Do you have to make every change they’ve suggested? You do not. Much of the critique feedback you receive will make you happy. Maybe not at first, but a high percentage will eventually make sense and help you strengthen your story.

“At some point, though, someone is going to make a suggestion you really don’t like. You’ll sit with it for a while, you’ll think about it, and you still won’t like it. It doesn’t fit your vision; it threatens to take the story in a direction that feels wrong; it doesn’t mesh with who you know your hero to be.
Don’t make the change. Let the comment go. This is your book, and you’re in charge. Honest!

“On the other hand … You signed up for this. You’re the one who hunted for this critique group. You’ve asked these people to read your chapters, to think about them and to get back to you. So really, you’d better listen to them.
When it’s your turn to be critiqued, go in with as open a mind as possible. This doesn’t mean you have to sit through the meeting smiling at every word your critique partners speak. But it does mean you pay attention, take notes and wait until you’re out the door before saying any of those swear words out loud.

“It also means that, when you are ready to revise, you take the time to consider each and every comment. Thoroughly. … Listen to your gut, but also listen to your critiquers. The combination of your writing and their responses is the magic of revision.”
—Becky Levine, “How to Revise From a Critique,” October 2010 (click here to check the rest of the article out)

(Image: Hiuppo [CC-BY-SA-2.5 (www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5)], via Wikimedia Commons)

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WRITING PROMPT: Midnight Madness
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At a midnight showing of a movie, something happens that wasn’t part of the script.

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    I grabbed the collar of my shirt and flapped it a few times.
    “Cologne, check, breath… check.” I said to myself as I held my palm to mouth walking towards the door. I had prepared all day for this midnight movie date with my ex. It’s been months since we had communicated, so I was surprised when she called a couple days ago. Now things had to be perfect; it was obvious she missed me, missed us, so I wanted tonight be and feel perfect, destined.
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  9. Dare Gaither

    Simone finally gave in.
    She had been stifling a yawn for what seemed like hours.
    Her jaw gave a slight pop and the yawn was over.
    She wished the movie was.

    She glanced over at Edward to see if he had noticed.
    He was enthralled with the courtroom drama unfolding
    in excruciating detail on the screen.
    Would it ever end?
    She envied the man snoring quietly two seats over.

    Suddenly she was seized with an uncontrollable urge
    to stand up and run screaming from the theater.
    She suspected at least half the audience would gratefully
    follow her. In a valiant effort to control herself, she
    stared intently at the man picking his nose in front of her.
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    Another yawn threatened to burst forth in self-defense.
    As she considered the excuse of a bathroom break to
    escape this hell of eternal boredom, a commotion erupted
    in the first row. The figure of a man with outstretched
    arms stood in silhouette against the flickering screen.

    “I did it!” He screamed as he dropped to his knees sobbing.

    “She’s hanging up to dry in the old tobacco barn out back.”

    He pulled out a tattered handkerchief and blew his nose
    with a loud trumpeting sound.

    “She’s finally quit nagging at me.”

    A security guard hurried down the aisle and escorted the
    babbling man out of the theater. As they reached the door,
    the man wrenched his arm from the guard’s grip.
    With Shakespearean flair he turned and addressed the audience.

    “I suffer not outrageous fortune’s strife,
    but with an arrow’s point unchained my life.”

    The prodding of the security guard ended his soliloquy.

    “I die a happy man!"

    He sighed and bowed to the crowd.
    His performance was met with a standing ovation.
    Simone clapped with tears in her eyes.
    Surely they could leave now.

  10. Janel

    Nicola arranged the candy on her lap. Chocolate on her left leg, fruit-flavored goodies on her right. The lights dimmed and she settled deeper into the padded seat. She had been looking forward to seeing this movie for weeks.

    Beside her David was already fidgeting, making his seat squeak. He looked like some kind of squirrel/human mutant in the dim light as he stuffed kernel after kernel of popcorn into his mouth until his cheeks were bulging. Nicola jiggled the drink cup positioned between them, making sure he had something to drink if he started to choke. He obviously didn’t want to watch the movie, but was doing it “because I love you.” Nicola couldn’t tell him she loved him, but it didn’t seem to bother him.

    The trailers finally faded and the movie began. Jack Carson’s face filled the screen. Saying that she was just a fan of him was like saying The Rolling Stones are just a band. She didn’t like scary movies, but since Jack was in this one she was willing to wrestle with her fear for a few hours. Ghosts and poltergeists were subjects she would be happy to never contemplate. As knives and frying pans crashed around the kitchen on the screen Nicola gripped the seat arms until her fingernails felt like they were going to split from the force. She screamed when a plate hit Jack’s character in the head, sending a river of blood down his face.

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    Nicola put her hand over her mouth, trying to mute her scream, as one of the actors struggle with a rope around her neck, tightened by some unseen force. She squirmed in her seat and punched David in the arm when he lightly ran his fingers down the back of her hair.


    “Stop touching my hair!”

    “I’m not!”

    Nicola slowly turned around. There was someone behind her. She could barely see them in the darkness. It looked like the person was wearing a black coat with the hood pulled over their head. She turned back to the screen when Jack began to speak. The fingers ran through her hair again.

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