November PAD Chapbook Challenge: Day 3

Okay, this prompt may be a little out there, but it’s inspired by a few albums I’ve listened to (and loved) over the years. They’ll have kind of a foreshadowing or refrain piece that shares a snippet of a song to come later on the album. And I want you to write a foreshadowing piece for a poem that you will fully compose later this month (Day 20, to be precise).


This piece should be short, sweet, and hint at some bigger picture that ties into your theme and the poem that you’ll be writing on Day 20. You should think of it almost as a puzzle piece that doesn’t become 100% clear until the accompanying poem is read later on in the collection.


Here’s my attempt for the day:


“I am the man”


Leave the door unlocked,
curtains open, and power on.


Only have a landline;
investigate that noise.


When you scream out…

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87 thoughts on “November PAD Chapbook Challenge: Day 3

  1. S.E.Ingraham

    Patti Williams – thank you so much for the encouragement – the night went very well; there is nothing like a room full or poets hanging off your every word to make you feel validated and like getting back at it! Even so, the ego is so fragile, your pat on my head was soooo needed, so bless you. Sharon I.

  2. Kate Berne Miller

    I Say No

    The phone rings
    it is you…asking again
    I remember the last time
    how it felt-what I knew
    afterwards…about the skip
    and stutter of an old LP
    the echos of the old song
    repeating. I say No
    the word a hard rock
    coughed out reluctantly,
    salted with tears, guilt,
    and a touch
    of pride. I
    say
    No.

  3. Sheryl Kay Oder

    The Dance

    The dance of the moments is not always in rhythm.
    Step, one, two, five, oops.

    Listening to the Lord’s song while others noises
    screech in my ear makes me dizzy at times.

    There are so many steps to learn and so
    many songs to sing–

    more likely many songs I need to ignore,
    not following their erratic tune at all.

  4. Victoria Hendricks

    Before Opening

    I sit in the car with all doors shut,
    hold myself together, coat collar up,
    I chant, circle words like wagons,
    fence myself in, breath by breath.
    Knock on window shakes conscious
    mind awake. What opening awaits?

  5. Michelle H.

    Wow! What wonderful posting over the last three days! I’ve enjoyed all your poems! I do have to mention that Iain, I am loving your Cats, Poetry and Death poems!! Heather, your lesson poems are a really neat format – I am enjoying them as well, but ouch, I feel for you. There truly are too many great poems to be able to mention you all here, but I am sooo looking forward to seeing where this month takes us!! Thanks everyone, it is such an honor to be in such good company again! Michelle

  6. Jane penland hoover

    Quiet Rite

    When I am alone and the outer world gone quiet

    words whisper in my head, words formed
    somewhere in my chest along the path of

    breath drawing in and pushing out.
    Write, write,
    there is something you must say.

    Here there is no stopping to discuss or fight or take
    direction from some worried voice warning me away.

    In this space beyond the reach of shadow, I am the writer.

  7. Callan

    Glimpse

    Just as I
    can’t build all my lines
    with perfect
    ten-syllable spines,
    I can’t decide
    how far from here
    I would like
    to be in a year.

    No longer as free
    to leave behind
    what I know
    and have in mind,
    I find I’m rooted here in ways
    I’ll explain in seventeen days…

  8. Paul W.Hankins

    “Wooden”

    Of course it would be pine,
    they have always been made
    in just this way:
    timber felled for just this purpose,
    to be hewn – carved and varnished
    and lined with silken pleats.

    Before the felling,
    every tree has a dream
    of sinking its roots
    deeper into the soil,
    to be carried to a place
    where the planting is revered
    to hear the revered hush of men
    before the dirt settles
    and the hole is filled.

    Somewhere in Pikeville,
    a tree stands on a hillside,
    forecasting the call
    that is yet to come;
    another chance to be
    born again – replanted.

  9. Spidey

    dunno where this is headed either but ok, am game….spidey

    forts
    by Juanita Lewison-Snyder

    we came upon a tree fort hidden deep in the forest,
    a sanctuary just out of reach from the sun
    rickety ladder, ashen with bits of lichen the color of bone
    all spiraling overtop an otherwise quiet bend in the river.

  10. jared david

    robert- i love the prompt. i have some near and dear albums that do the same, although i doubt many of them overlap

    Anticipation

    Close your eyes,
    Look ahead, into the future,
    Now tell me,
    What do you feel?

    as many poems as i’ve left unfinished, doing it intentionally gave me some trouble

  11. k weber

    Press Continue

    on our friendship, years
    of wind and piano
    parts

    The alley, unbroken
    but always a Polaroid

    The city: a smell
    trapped in our clothes

    When you are old
    you’ll need suspenders

    When you are you
    it makes me laugh
    in a language I don’t know

    And I don’t understand
    how we keep coming back
    to the beginning

    I want to relive
    all the good parts

    Choose our own adventure,
    this time much better

    You are the happiest
    robot, the grumpiest
    boy

    You’d probably build
    me a time machine

    You’d probably reboot
    my circuits; then smother
    me in hugs

    I want to squeeze
    your bitter beard face

    and choke all that glitter
    out of you

  12. Vanessa O'Dwyer

    What They Say

    They say he’s not an equal,
    Is not free and cannot think
    They say she cannot play with them
    And that she is a freak
    You need to know you are to die
    Because you are so different
    I own you now so do my tasks
    Or feel my harsh judgment.
    Who can say that this is so?
    Who is this unjust person?
    And what can I do personally
    Before conditions worsen?

    Vanessa O’Dwyer

  13. jared david

    mary k- do you befriend a lot of people on doomed buses and subway cars, and then get off one station before the wreck? just the image in my mind. might be way off, but i like it (you’re poem).

  14. Earl Parsons

    I’m with Peggy. Earlier in the day would work well with me because I think better in the morning, and if I’m busy, I’ll have the day to process what I want to write.

    Or, Robert, you could do like I do when I’m sending out daily devotions; you can send the next day’s out the night before. Again, just as in Peggy’s note, just a suggestion.

  15. Peggy Goetz

    The Silver Comb

    I comb the moments
    silver, antique
    the weeks, the years
    to find the beginning
    the first missed stitch
    first stumble when I might
    have picked it all up
    and turned another
    way instead.

    Nov. 3, 2008

    I know this is your thing Robert and I am enjoying the challenge of it all, but it would be nice if you posted your new prompts earlier in the day. Just a suggestion.

  16. Bruce Niedt

    Theme

    The theme may sneak up on you –
    a growling complaint among the basses,
    insinuations by the first clarinet,
    a muffled background call of French horns.

    But there’s every guarantee you’ll hear it
    by the last movement, a slow crescendo
    up that melodic hill, and at the very crest
    a triumphant cymbal crash.

  17. Sara McNulty

    Hmmm. With the theme of my chapbook being the many uses for a word represented by a color, I am at a loss to produce a foreshadowing (which could of course, be black.) Here are 2 entries:

    Red

    Red candles lit and glowing
    present a backdrop for my
    lacy lingerie, ruby and flowing,
    my legs smooth and bare.

    While awaiting you I gaze
    at a book of poetry, well read
    though I blush as I read a phrase
    seemingly written for we two.

    Due at the hour of sweeping sunset
    your eyes will illuminate lust,
    shooting sparks, your needs unmet
    until you lie with me on red satin sheets.

    Peek at the Day of Twenty

    Sailors scramble on deck
    to investigate the rumor
    of warm welcome women
    eager to celebrate their
    departure from ship and
    the freedom of Fleet Week.

  18. Judy Roney

    Bliss

    I left a message on my husband’s
    cell. Our daughter is engaged
    and happy, our son has graduated
    college and landed the job he
    hoped for. Our job is done. Life
    doesn’t get any better than this I
    sing into my cell phone to let him
    know I look forward to this new
    chapter of our lives. I wish I could
    take it back, the total abandon, the pure
    bliss, the moment when all is perfect.

  19. satia

    Rod, I’ve never tried to write a chapbook in this manner so it is all curious to me as well. However, I’m also trying to focus more on the process than the end results. Should I have a chapbook when all is said and done, that would be wonderful. If I do not, I’ll still have at least one poem worthy of revision.

  20. Rodney C. Walmer

    I hope I am on the right track here, and not just spinning my wheels in the wrong direction. You all have such wonderful poems that all seem to link together so well, while I feel like I am going the wrong way.

    Rod.

  21. Mary K

    Ghosts

    I sort through my mind for ghosts of my past
    people almost forgotten, but not quite,
    those I knew weeks or perhaps months
    who might have been important to me if only
    their stories had not ended abruptly, never
    to be updated. I wonder where they are now.,
    the multitude of faceless ghosts of my past.

  22. Rodney C. Walmer

    A Day in the Life

    She often comes home late
    Tired and angry about her day
    then she wants to debate
    something from a long time away

    It seems she has so much to say
    while I just sit and listen
    I hand her a bouquet
    A tear forms
    her eyes glisten
    anger transforms. . .

    ©Rodney C. Walmer 11/03/08 Preview poem

  23. Steve LaVoie

    Wow a really inventive prompt we have here. It will be fun to think of how to work "the mystery" out.

    Envelope

    Where is the letter?
    Where is the postcard
    With the amusing picture of
    Cats with sunglasses shaking maracas?
    Isn’t there supposed to be a notice
    Saying they are going to take all the clocks
    In my room if I don’t send them back
    Their pens and pencils?
    Why, why, why, did they send
    An empty envelope?

  24. satia

    To be honest, I am not sure how to foreshadow a piece I haven’t written. So I made four attempts and am posting all four because I don’t know which will actually be used for day 20.

    white tiger caged, lies
    panting, unable to run
    snowflakes forgotten

    Yesterday I accepted
    Today I do not
    I have nothing left to bargain
    But I won’t believe my questions
    Will never be answered.

    Why ask “Why?”
    The answer is: Why not?
    More questions from questions
    make me dizzy with unanswers.
    The answers?
    “Negative.”
    The cure?
    “None.”
    Why?
    “We don’t know.”
    I do.
    But I keep asking
    for more than
    “Why not?”

    My Feat

    Today I celebrated
    the anniversary of my
    incurable condition.
    Two years and counting
    and I am learning to listen
    to my two feet.

  25. patti williams

    Day 3: Foreshadowing

    The call came in the late morning
    The ring as common as any other
    But the voice on the other end was
    Vague, serious, and official.
    There was an emergency
    And he had to come quickly.
    In the small room he sat in the chair
    Hearing words he had never dreamed
    Would be meant for him about her.
    The Chaplin sat beside him, his friend
    Leaned up against the wall.
    The man sat frozen,
    Shaking hands
    Covered his wet face.
    Far away
    He could hear the doctor saying
    Phrases like:
    “Instant, no suffering, investigation,
    Arrangements, identification.”

    Words bounced around the man
    In the small room
    As her death
    Patiently waited for him
    Just outside the door,
    Their children
    Still happy and innocent
    Playing at home
    But for the first time ever
    Playing without a Mommy.

    How could he ever tell them?
    The man rose on weak legs
    Opened the door to a different life
    Unlike any he had ever imagined.
    How could they survive when she had not?

  26. S.E.Ingraham

    Since I’ve Changed the working title of my chapbook but slightly, I’m noting same here, "A Tear at the Edge of the Universe"…

    Also – this is very last minute but I’m posting it anyway – I’m one of the featured readers at a Poetry Reading here tonight and am still debating about what to read (we get ten minutes each) – I want to present only Chapbook material and have posted some of my possibilties for critiquing over on the WD poetry critique place, so if anyone has the inclination, time or whatever, I would be eternally grateful for any kind of feedback. I think I have something like 3 1/2 hours ’til showtime – like I said, very last minute. Wish I’d thought of it sooner…

    Will do my prompt contribution when I get back from the reading tonight. Am enjoying this very much Robert even tho’the pace, combined with NaNoWriMo and my kid getting married, plus this thing tonight – is killing me…

    Kidding – sorta.

    S.E.Ingraham
    (Sharon)

  27. Rachel

    Hmmm,… do i need a title for this one? A title for the snippet? Or the whole poem? Or not at all? Here’s my pieve for today (does it need to say more?):

    It fell apart…

    That stunted club raised high above her head,
    poised and full of dread,
    Rage and pain rushing down and coming to BLOW
    upon the air…

    with crushing force

    and all she heard was the shatter
    of the matter

    in pieces at her feet.

    And she feel apart.

  28. Heather

    Lesson #3: Love

    She asked her love
    To stay
    Just a little longer
    Wanted to know when
    He’d be back
    And he said he didn’t know,
    Wasn’t sure
    If he’d be back
    At all

    She asked her love
    Why he couldn’t stay
    What was wrong?
    Didn’t she matter?
    Didn’t he love her?
    He said,
    “No”

    She asked her love
    How it could be
    That they were
    So close
    And now
    She finds herself
    Alone
    He didn’t respond
    Because his heart
    Was long gone,
    Had found
    Another
    Home

    Lesson #3: Love Hurts

  29. Cheryl Chambers

    Neal Sinks His Teeth In

    He started living on a Tuesday, just full of it
    the grace which comes from certain days
    emerging in the week. He couldn’t wait
    for each passing week unfolding into months
    stringing together as years. He rushed forward
    like a train coming undone at the hinges
    like the fever and fury of fast paced traveling
    could keep him alive and at his best well being.
    Grammar school begot mediocrity, with a slight
    mention of excellence; middle school lent itself
    to a cheating extravaganza where his false front
    hid every thing he did not know. Everyone thought
    him brilliant. Only he knew. High school reclaimed
    a devil and turned him into Milton’s Satan: someone
    sometimes soft and tender; completely huggable.
    College never occurred expect through the eyes
    and glances of acquaintances’ glasses. What is it
    he can do. He doesn’t know and still searches
    as if for a holy grail, as if he could truly be like Jesus.
    What would He do?

  30. Connie

    When the Domino Tips

    When setting up a huge domino display,
    each little unit doesn’t look like much—
    just brightly colored pieces of polystyrene
    standing together like soldiers in a line.
    But even when they are all arranged, they
    may just look like a pattern of colors. But
    when the builder tips the first domino…

  31. Iain D. Kemp

    …and here’s the second…

    Dear Moosehead,

    Brother, you ain’t gonna believe what
    that dumb bitch sister of yours has done now.
    Your cousin says I should kick her out
    (and your Mama too!). But we both know that’s
    just cos she knows I’d pay her to clean up the place.
    Anyway I’m way too freaked to get into this BS
    so we can talk later…
    Pickya up at seven. We can go bowling & eat Dogs.

    Yours shocked to the core

    Ringo the Howler

    Iain

  32. Lori

    Priority

    never mind, I’ll do it myself
    but when you wake up to darths
    and epileptic trees remember
    you chose us even
    when the driver said another
    was closer.
    Oh and I have malpractice insurance.

  33. Iain D. Kemp

    Here’s my first…

    Farewell Dear Friend

    Man and companion stand together.
    Together, alone at the small grave.
    There are no prayers; there will be only a plant to mark the spot.
    ‘Tis farewell to one known only by his misheard name.
    The companion sits is silence, remembering it seems.
    The man reads a short verse, remembering like a dream….
    As it starts to rain the man moves inside, the companion follows
    But only after marking the grave
    In his own unique way…

    Farewell for now Dear Friend! Goodbye Cooking Fat!

    Iain

  34. Earl Parsons

    And for the SS chap:

    Cobwebs

    Be patient
    My friend
    Let me do the thinking
    Or
    If you just can’t stand it
    Jump on into your mind
    If you dare
    Beware the cobwebs

  35. Earl Parsons

    For the LL&L chap, day 3:

    What Lies Ahead

    Look closely at where you came from
    Look closely at where you are
    Look closely at how you got
    From there to here
    And
    If you look closely enough
    You might see
    What lies ahead

  36. Nancy

    Reading between the Lines

    Whether Shakespeare’s translation
    of the forty-third Psalm, the
    shake
    and the
    spear
    strategically placed,
    or the
    backward
    masking
    on Abbey Road,
    you keep looking so hard for what’s
    not there, you miss what’s
    in front
    of
    your
    eyes.

    Nancy Posey

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