All right! From just scanning, it appears the first day went very well. But now things get tricky, because it is the second day. (Cue: Evil Laugh)
For today’s prompt, use an epigraph to kickstart your poem. That is, use a quotation. You can use a favorite of your own, or if you’re having trouble thinking of one, I’ve provided a few below. To format an epigraph poem, a poet places the quotation between the title and the body of the poem, while also giving credit to the source of the quotation.
Example quotations:
“Our homes are on our backs and don’t forget it,” -Molly Peacock
“Always forgive your enemies–nothing annoys them so much.” -Oscar Wilde
“Every noble work is at first impossible.” -Thomas Carlyle
“Behind every great man is a woman rolling her eyes.” -Jim Carrey
“A friend doesn’t go on a diet because you are fat.” -Erma Bombeck
Here’s my attempt:
“Here I Come”
“This time, you can trust me.”
-Lucy Van Pelt (via Charles M. Schultz)
Signed document or not,
you know my foot cannot
resist a challenge, not
that I expect this knot
inside me to unknot
itself. Your trust is not
what I crave. Like dry snot
on my sleeve, I do not
want this thing I cannot
kick, so ready or not…
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“A man doesn’t have time enough to have a time for everything. He doesn’t have seasons enough to have a season for every purpose.” ~ Yehuda Amachai
NEVER ENOUGH
Tempest Fuget.
And it does fly.
In the whirlwind of life
we are bound by the dictates
of the time we are allotted.
And it runs out in the most
inopportune times.
Make the best of it.
Gather ye rosebuds.
Get your ass in gear.
Before your mainspring ceases.
I see you’re bringing your A-game to this challenge, Walt. Good stuff!
Thanks, oh exaulted one! I’m feeling the muse. You would know about a poetic “ESCAPE”
Hi Robert,
I was wondering why my entry hasn’t gone through? I posted at 9:24am.
Is there anything I missed? Please let me know if I have to repost.
I’m new here, so I’m a bit lost. Thanks.
I flipped it apparently. I put my quotation before the cart. However, the profile pic issue from yesterday plays like this. Make sure the email you have provided is attached to your avatar. If you use Gravatar.com, make sure those e-mails match as well. It will be universal for any site as long as the attached email remains the same.
Thanks guys. That quote is from one of my favorite poems. “A MAN IN HIS LIFE” by Yehuda Amachai. I love the message and it was tailor-made for this prompt.
good one, but tempus? he fugit.
I know Viv, but mine is a stiffer “Draft” thus the tempest!
I chuckled at the opening pun. A worthy sentiment to have!
And also, there’s a Walt-face icon now.
How do we get icons, anybody?
Sibella, check above for info on icon/profile pics. Any questions, put the out here we’ll get you on board.
Nice one Walt, man you’re quick!
and it works for yesterday’s challenge as well
. Love the sentiment.
A-game, for sure!!
Walt,
If I only had some of your poetic awesomeness…
“To sleep, perchance to dream – ay, there’s the rub.” Hamlet (III, i, 65-68)
Perchance to Dream
It’s so dark here each night, waiting for
the memorable flight to fantasy,
the fears or thrills that you may have,
but I almost never do. I lay in this bed
with my itinerary made of today’s regrets
and tomorrow’s dread,
dreaming of being able to dream.
It’s like groping in the dark for a shadow,
something I can’t see or feel,
but I know is there, if only I …
I will slip into the black depths of sleep,
a struggling shipwrecked sailor going under,
only to open my eyes to another awakened darkness
hours later, taunted by a clock that shows
I missed rescue once again.
But last night, before I sank back
to the nothing that is my slumber,
this vacuum of fancy, I once more pleaded
with the universe for colorful release.
As I was about to surrender once again
to the vacant sleeping dark, an angel appeared
and beckoned me to join her,
tucking beneath her wing of white .
“Here,” she whispered in my ear,
“hold me and be mindful of now,
not yesterday, not tomorrow. Feel my warmth,
and drop your baggage. You won’t need it
where we’re going.”
I never knew my gloom could transform
into a world of such light and color,
such sound and feeling, such heart-lifting joy.
But it did.
When I awoke, I saw dawn in a light so new,
it might as well be approaching from the west.
Tonight, I will leave the dreary day at the door,
I will root fearsome tomorrow from under my bed,
and I will prepare for my angel to join me
in our dream.
Hope this posting is OK. Seems the title of a poem I wrote Monday is based on a line from Hamlet. Good morning, Robert. Thought I’d try my hand at November PAD this year. And, true to form and my silly writing “process,” I put off working on yesterday’s Procrastination theme until this morning. – JH
And they were both worth the wait, Joseph. I love the company we keep here. It inspires!
Quite exquisite, Joseph.
A truly wonderful poem, which will linger in the memory.
Is it bad that at 7:30 I am checking to see what is the new prompt. Either its newbie excitement or a love for writing. Maybe both. Working on my poem now
Gregory, I’m a three year “vet” and I get to work at 6:30 am. I have PA refreshing from the moment I log in. Excitement and the love of writing will make you a three year vet as well. In about three years if my calculationa are correct!
I’m a newbie, and I love that this has inspired me to put on my poet hat again. I spend far too much time writing other stuff for money and never take the time to write poetry for love and fun. This, I’m loving.
I’ve been doing this about four years now, and I still have the fantasy in my mind that someday Robert will have posted the prompt at 12:03, and it will be smiling up at me at 7 am.
now that would be my fantasy too
Confusion will be my epigraph….
‘When every man is torn apart with nightmares and with dreams’
King Crimson – The Court of the Crimson King
‘Confusion will be my epigraph’
Coupled with an astounding ability
Unmuted by the passing years
To mishear and joyfully misquote
Lyrics from all those songs I listened to
on John Peel late night on the radio
Whilst attempting to unravel
the moral code of Jane Austen’s Emma
and the role of the Napoleonic Wars
My first inspired misrendering
Away in a Christmas Carol
Gentle Jesus, weak and wild!’ I sang
puzzling my mother no end when I came home
from nursery school.
I fear going to operas for that reason
What did the fat lady just sing? What?
…Surely not.
Smile on my face! Thank you — I love “Gentle Jesus, weak and wild” — I can hear it.
I do so enjoy reading the magical moments popping from your mind…
Delightful – thanks, Moskowitz
chuckle. thanks for sharing. reminds me of the phase my daughter went through around age 4 when she sang Michael Jackson’s “Man in the Mirror” lyrics as ” the man in the liver”.
Yay – that could be me!
“Another Ordinary”
“I know it sounds a bit cliché
There’s no such thing
As just an ordinary day ” – Phineas and Ferb
She shuffles through
the piles of leaves
at the edge of the trail,
then clambers up onto a stump,
posing for a photograph.
As I snap the sun washed scene
it occurs to me that this is, perhaps,
the thirteenth
or fourteenth photograph
from this same spot.
The first, of a small girl,
barely walking, who needed to be picked up
and placed on the stump
while her mother worried she might fall.
This last, for now, of a girl
tall enough to ride
a roller-coaster.
I discretely wipe my eyes
as I tuck away
another ordinary day.
Jerry, your last lines had me blinking away involuntary tears. What a perfectly developed moment.
nice. Especially liked the twist where you switch to the child’s perspective of how tall she is: tall enough to ride the roller coaster
Oh, Chev … I should not have read this on my break at work. I’ll have to pull myself together before someone sees my tears.
If only every father loved their children as you do.
From one Pop to another- this was perfect. Gorgeous. – bm
the senasation of wonderment in the space between of children and ourselves is delivery big-time here
MASTER AND SAGE
“Try not. Do, or do not. There is no try!” ~ Jedi Master Yoda
Futile attempts are
when success comes not!
Become we do, what want we wish,
but loss, arise it does, when
achievement flat on its face falls!
Satisfied be not, when accomplished
nothing is. Try not! Do
or do not. There is no try!
Winning? Duh! Truth it is, yes?
Winning? Duh! A Jedi craves not these things
May the Force be with you, Walt! Though, judging by your prolificacy, the Force has never left you
Ha ha. Thanks Mariya. I’m in good company (and usually I’m in Good company). How’s that for a force with which to reckon!
Oh, Good!
Bravo, Walt! Well done. Brain, think not, this time of the morning.
This had me rolling, Walt! Your genius strikes again. Thanks for being here. <3
Looking after Luna
Tell me what you eat, and I will tell you what you are.
Anthelme Brillat-Savarin (1755 – 1826), The Physiology of Taste, 1825
Bread will be Thursday
and butter if we’re lucky
or frozen pizza if I can spare the change.
The dogs will need feeding too. It’s funny
how I can skimp on food for people but not for the animals.
There’s always cereal (did I remember milk?).
When her mother is away
I make the brat a special treat.
Fresh bread stuffed with sausage and bacon
and topped with cheese and tomatoes.
She doesn’t like tomatoes but likes red sauce.
The dogs beg for human food but don’t get it
except for last week’s mashed potatoes
mixed in with their biscuits. We never ask
for a tin of puppy meat on toast
but then we don’t eat the cat’s vomit either.
I bought her a multipack of crisps and a pound of cheese.
She ate both in a day
along with two pizzas and a block of ham.
She’s a growing girl
but she picks the onions and the mushrooms off
before she cooks her food
and makes bœuf bourguignon in catering class
but won’t taste it because of the vegetables.
I’m reminded here how irritated my mother used to get: “You won’t eat eggs or squash or lima beans, but you kiss the cat on the mouth!”
Nicely realized.
Aw, I’ve had those days. Grocery shopping, going to the food bank. I bought the good dog food too, even when I was skimping on the groceries…
Well done!
Of Fear, Said Pearce
“To live a creative life, we must lose our fear
of being wrong,” said Joseph Chilton Pearce.
Well, cheers!—to that I say
A life like that does thrust
the sharpest spear in hearts
of those who live in fear.
Again this toast, I say
A creative life must trust
And make her heart a spear
to pierce the face of fear.
Rejection, depression
Vice versa, reflection—
All’s been done before
Could you lose anything more?
For the third time, I say
A creative life must trust
Her heart must thrust, like spear
and pierce the face of fear.
Forgiveness
“Always forgive your enemies–nothing annoys them so much.” -Oscar Wilde
How can I forgive my enemy?
When the enemy
is me.
Thanks for the quote Robert! It fit perfect with my frame of mind today.
Impressive and thought-provoking.
For an eleven-word poem, that’s damn powerful.
Absolutely. Wow.
What they said — a lot of punch packed into so few words.
I want to write this down and carry it around with me.
Thanks everyone.
The best ones always make it look easy. Home run. – Thanks Moskowitz
Ah, but that is why forgiveness = freedom. This world is a hall of mirrors.
Well, I came up with this one
DUALITY
“We all might get killed, or even worse – expelled.” (Hermione Granger)
Danger
is facing Miss Granger.
Believe it or not,
She’s the constant victim of a vicious plot.
To ensnare her into breaking the rules
And thus, get her kicked out of the school.
While the target of the plotter
Is really Mr. Potter.
© 2011 Mariya Koleva
fun–just finished reading the first one aloud to my youngest grandson, so the quote was fresh in m y mind
Oh, many thanks, Penny! I adore the series! And Hermione is my most favouritest of all.
I think I bit my tongue when I read that outloud!
No, you didn’t? Yes, you did! Love Potter/Rowling! Great reminder, this one.
On the Road
“Trouble rides a fast horse.” TV Western
My goat is tethered to a low limb of that maple tree
nibbling feather grass and snorting at the dust raised
by your flight down the road, big trouble on the way
to someone somewhere, too important yourself to take
notice of a small woman on foot leading an old goat
toward water and a cool patch of grass. Your stallion
throws rocks that make me bleed and I fall hard on my
hip and make a gash, but you can’t be troubled with
such small damage done, for you’re on your way to
grand things—wars, fires, murders and mayhem, big doings.
I always wonder about the ancillary stories in movies, books, etc. A random gunshot hits a passerby – how does that change/destroy their life/the lives of others connected to them? On rare occasions it comes back into the narrative, but so often a story flies through ten thousand other stories without touching them – you brought this skillfully to the fore.
I agree with Joseph. And what a great quote!
(NB: When I tried to post this a minute ago, I got an error from WordPress: “You are posting too fast. Slow down!” I guess WordPress rides a slow nag.)
Thanks, Friends. Yes, I got that same message yesterday, but I neither knew how to post too fast nor to slow down. Hmmm, is there a poem for that quotation? ;-D
Oh, I’m sure there will be. ^_^ (Probably several!)
How Do You Do That
“Poetry demands a man with a special gift for it,
or else one with a touch of madness in him” — Aristotle
someone asks again, as if
a poem’s a mysterious thing
made of spells and incantations
a pinch of newt and eye of frog
perhaps a melting pot of neurons
and transmitters, the gift of
a poet’s synapse,
words transmitted
into its cleft to mature
like fine wine
then impulse excites the brain
re-orders syllables in stanzas
an electric shock of language
flows down the arm, through fingers
that twitch, involuntary stimulation
of the writing receptors, and
pen in hand the poet’s finger writes
and having writ, moves on to
the next mad conjugation of words
Carol A. Stephen
November 2, 2011
Beautifully biological.
Though I think there is some mysterious process in the brain that happens or doesn’t happen… right brain communes with left, etc.
“the next mad conjugation of words”
that’s as succinct a definition of poetry as possible. -loved it. – mosk
When asked “how do you do that,” the only answer can be “how do you NOT?” ^_^
Asphyxia
“We must act out passion before we can feel it.”
- Jean-Paul Sartre
I never liked “hold your breath”
because holding always, for me,
meant hands, fingers,
best employed elsewhere.
Not for something so transient
as breath.
It made me feel like
my lungs had palms and long,
thin bones, sealed and clasped
(here is the church of oxygen–
here is the steeple)
and locking, unlocking,
with the rhythm of inhalation.
Now, you tell me,
hold your breath at that moment
of precipice, vinegar-faced,
throat closed up tight.
(But mouth, wide open.)
Something about the pressure
changing–
makes everything burst
with white light. Why do I do
these things
for you?
But I say I learned this
back-and-forth from nature: so,
I suppose I also learned
the following of the heart, the stark
obedience of moments,
granting the prayers of lovers.
(Not because it is wise or pleasant.
But because my pleasure
is wrapped up in yours.)
Such beautiful tension in this — I love the way your opening leads the reader by the hand to the end.
strong images.
That’s a really wonderful set of images and the flow from one to the next is lovely.
So wonderful…I looked for your poem yesterday, Joseph, but I didn’t see one.
Nice thinking behind this poem, Joseph.
“Always forgive your enemies–nothing annoys them so much.” -Oscar Wilde
On a cold, windswept night,
As my memories swirl by your mind,
The ghost of my soul haunts the fields –
Darkness mirrors your mind, and my rest
has become your torment.
I lay here, sway here, grateful for my time,
Yet you will not forget the injustice
Of your crime – because I have -
Amongst the trees, beneath laced stars,
You are unsettled, turning in your slumber,
And I, dream peacefully forever.
Your plague, your harmful device
Has come back to you – not in anger,
For my forgiveness fans your flames,
Flames which for you could burn no brighter.
Excellent!
I hope you’re not the Justine that I did that to. Please release me from the curse
– seriously, very good. Mosk
NICE!
“We work in the dark, we do what we can, we give what we have. Our passion is our doubt, and our passion is our task. All of the rest is the madness of art.” –Henry James
The Work is our Life
Mr. James has it right
As an artist
First is to begin
We have no idea really
We work in the dark
We pick up the pencil
We draw
The brush
We paint
We chip the stone
There is no promise
Of the outcome
We do what we can
That is all we can do
The line goes this way
We follow
We give what we have
We work to the best of our ability
It is a piece we will sign
We will put our names on it
For all times
Today
And long after we cease to be
It is our doubt
That is our passion
We begin and end
With it
And all else is the madness of art
This is all consuming
There is no need of more
I loved this! – This could be my manifesto! – Bril! – Mosk
Sunday Morning Breakfast at the Shelter
We cannot cure the world of sorrows, but we can choose to live in joy.
Joseph Campbell
It is what it is, he told me over breakfast.
There are millions of hungry children
in India and China. I can’t feed them all –
hell, I can hardly feed myself –
but a bag of flour and a dozen eggs
makes Sunday morning pancakes for twenty kids
who won’t have any dinner this afternoon.
It may not make much difference to the universe,
but the smiles on their faces light my world
for at least another week.
“It may not make much difference to the universe, but the smiles on their faces light my world
for at least another week.” Now HERE is a quote, beautiful soul!
Thank you, Marie — nothing infuriates me more than people who do nothing because they can’t do everything. To me, the essence of choosing to live in joy is not to ignore the troubles of the world, but to delight in making the little differences where you can.
Absolutely. Absolutely.
Oh, lovely poem. Absolutely beautiful in form and spirit. ^_^
I’m moving this from Day 1 to Day 2 where it should have been posted
The Lunchtime News: Trick or Treat
‘The liberty of an individual must be far limited; he must not make himself a nuisance to other people’ – John Mill
His lawyer inhales,
counts to ten and then
ten again as they wait.
A starchy man who wears
his red tie all askew,
he holds Mr. Assange’s
defense and a dusty
white wig in the palm
of his liver-spotted hand.
He’s glad today’s not
Halloween. Headlines
reading Trick or Treat
aren’t apt to be seen.
Raindrops
“Life isn’t about waiting for the storm to pass..it’s learning to dance in the rain” “Anonymous
Raindrops splash on my face
run down my collar
makes a trail on my spine
causes shivers to follow
Gray day, gray clouds
tromping through puddles
wet shoes, wet socks
hair plastered to my head
silver stream runs quick
I jump, skip to avoid
wait! that was fun!
as I dance the way home
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http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2011/11/02/learning-curve/
Elizabeth
Pulley Get Me Outta Here!
“If you die in an elevator, be sure to press the Up button.” ~Sam Levenson
I hate that crowded, closed-in space
containing members of ‘Rat Race’.
That demon lift: elevator.
And if I die before my floor
I only pray I’ll have strength for
pressing ‘UP’ initiator.
But here’s the thing: I don’t know if
I’ll do it ‘ere I am a stiff.
Kind of like a late dumb waiter.
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you crack me up, RJ!
muahaha! I hope you press it, RJ!
Gigglegigglegiggle
Pre-Occupied
“The philosophers have only interpreted the world, in various ways; the point, however, is to change it.” Karl Marx
What use the finer points of Payne
When people wait for jobs and bread
In long lines in the sun and wind and rain?
Our money thrown as bombs, and others dead,
While politicians moan their sad refrain,
Pointing bloody fingers at the other head,
Just talking, while the people feel the pain
Of sickness, want, and lack of dignity. Instead,
Let’s act to change, and we don’t need to train
In glib semantics; we heard what was said
To placate, and to put to sleep the brain,
And try to make us all forget the dread
Of war and poverty, of loved ones starved and slain,
In the name of the almighty dollar, pocketed
Before meeting just our basic needs. Our loss, their gain,
Although through our own labor they are fed,
We plummet down; follow leaders, all insane,
Other’s thoughts and hatreds fill our heads,
Wake up, wake up! Arise, shake off the chains!
A better world awaits us; forge ahead.
[This one needs work, I think, but no time today. Ninth wedding anniversary festivities await! (And so does my very patient dear husband ; )]
I’d love to hear the Human Megaphone recite this! Happy Anniversary to you both! -mosk
Grazie, mosk. We had a relaxing day.
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Lessons My Dad Taught Me
It was late summer of my 7th year.
A month away from my 8th,
and I remember it as clearly
as the chilled mountain stream that shocked
my bare feet into shrill agony.
I was not about to move them though,
sat there next to my dad on a fallen log
that was softened from rot and billowed moss,
an ancient sleeping hulk with its head
supported by the opposite shore.
He fished – I froze.
He talked – I listened.
He smiled and I melted
despite the icy water
racing against my legs.
He and I were buddies.
Fishing buddies he said,
even though I didn’t have a pole
and hated worms and screamed
when I touched a cold writhing fish.
He looked down at me,
his pole and line jumping
against the river’s current,
and said “Don’t forget how
things feel today. Tomorrow
they’ll not feel the same.”
The details in this make it delicious — and such good advice.
Thank you, Chamie. My dad was a very special man.
Beautiful. Very touching and honest. I love, love, love the way I can see it happening.
Thank you. I’m glad that you like it.
You’ve captured my own dad and me, Misk. Wish I’d written this.
Aaaah, Marie. Big hugs.
Wonderful! And how I love MacNeice. Thank you.
And, thank you, Sibella, for your lovely comment.
JUST A LITTLE OL’ GARDEN
“People think we set in the house drinkin’ RC Cola
and eatin’ Moon Pies. But we don’t.”
Steve Mullens, tending his family’s apple orchard
Some vegetables, a few fruit trees.
How much work can it be?
They should sell their produce for half the price.
Smiles, nods, and knowing glances.
That’s right, folks. You could grow it yourself.
Scatter a few seeds and watch them grow.
Forget testing and turning, tilling and amending.
Don’t worry about worms or slugs,
wind and weeds, scale and wilt.
Don’t bother with stakes or hoops or fencing.
So what if marauding raccoons break
your corn stalks and strip the young ears.
So what if the rabbits munch on your lettuce.
Who are you? Mr. McGregor? You’re willing to share.
And say, aren’t those Japanese beetles pretty?
Ah, gardening, that’s the life!
Candidates Debate
“Be obscure clearly.” E.B. White
Be difficult to understand.
Speak plainly, on the other hand.
You’ll confuse your opposition.
Ambiguous…the way to go,
but say it straight so folks won’t know
where you stand on each position.
as a front-running candidate.
Take this advice: when in debate,
‘stump.’ You’ll be a politician.
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Nice…I love the first 2 lines.
Hear, hear, RJ, well said!
“Mama exhorted her children at every opportunity to ‘jump at de sun.’ We might not land on the sun, but at least we would get off the ground.”
-Zora Neale Hurston, Dust Tracks on a Road, 1942
Exultation
They said come to America.
Take opportunity and grow.
Take opportunity to prosper.
Mummy said I’ll go,
and like lava soaked diamond
the world will crack me
open. I’ll be worth something
more than I could be
in oil stained soils
dripping red from greed.
Flee from this achromatic calling
a woman must heed
and give birth to in the dust.
No, “Go! Go! Go”,
she cries. “You must!”
I pack her unborn dreams,
the seeds she never planted
and crossed an ocean
to have my wishes granted.
Mummy, I have arrived.
This place is not easy.
Much work to do
Before I can shine.
Mummy, “Ese gan.”
Mummy, Thank you.
This is no easy sacrifice.
“Mon ‘ife e”- I love you.
©2011 Leenadria
Just realized I didn’t put the title above the quote. Okay, I’ve fixed it but not going to repost the edit.
I love both the poem and the choice of quote.
This is a fascinating story, and I suspect that there’s a long line of inspiration to come from it. Very nicely done.
Guitar
“My guitar is not a thing. It is an extension of myself. It is who I am. “- Joan Jett
I wish I could play the guitar
Feel the music in my hands, through my arms and into my head
Beats, rhythms more than metaphors and repititition’ s of the poems I have written
And I feel time stand still
and when time is poisoned by memories of happier times
I want to play this feeling, this music in my head.
I want to feel rhythm in my hands
I want to feel the connection to something greater than I am.
I wish I could play the guitar.
I like this. I wish I could play guitar too!
You’re right. There is nothing like poetry vibrating along the strings of a guitar.
Wednesdays are haiku day =)
Excel in Spite
“Always bear in mind that your own resolution to succeed is more important than any other.”
Abraham Lincoln
How do we succeed?
Listen to the nay sayers
And feed them their words.
Wow. EXCELLENT.
POLITICAL POETRY AND CRAZY POLITICS
or
STIRRIN’ THE PUDDIN’
“Pound’s Crazy. All poets are. They have to be”
-Ernest Hemingway
“Addressing crowds through their arse-holes”
- Ezra Pound
Who should we arrest,
If we were still to imprison
Those that spoke their mind
Against Country – calling it treason?
Right wing radicals,
Intent on protecting the “evil rich”?
Left wing loonies,
Sure that Socialism is the solution?
“I did not have sexual relations…”
Wait – wrong guy.
That was the rich white Democrat from
Decadent decades past;
Not the rich black Republican
With an equally faulty memory.
Will he too get a media pass?
Occupy schmockupy.
What are you protesting again?
Oh…No, still don’t get it;
Explain it to me again.
How is your fornicating in the park
And defecating in the street
Morally superior to proverbial pillaging
By ‘rich’ of both left and right?
Maybe bigger prisons are the answer;
Politicians, lawyers, media, protestors too.
Reboot this circus-government-machine,
Restore the original settings.
(Maybe I should take a break from the news for a little while – now, where did I put my blood pressure meds?)
Well done, Mark. This doesn’t hatefully and perhaps irrationally target any one side. I’m with you … need a break from the news and the political Facebook chatter. Oy …
Thank you, and me too, also – what Yogi said, If i had actually said anything.
“Reboot…this circus…machine”
Cheers for saying what some of us feel
You said it all. I am sick to death of all of the endless partisan anger and the true perpetrators still sitting high and comfy in their political position, trying to steer the words to their own advantage. Ugh.
Very well put, Mark, I’m with you: hit reboot someone!
“I never said most of the things I said.” ~ Yogi Berra
So, Yogi Berra
never said most of the things
he said? Me neither.
LOL!
Ha! haha.
Amen! – Great! – Moskowitz
Thanks you guys!
This is a great quote and poem too!! Loving the coincidences today! We both picked Yogi Berra!
Accretion
“Where the woman in love is dew,
we are a plummeting stone.”
–Rainer Maria Rilke
Having never been a woman. Having never been
in love with the dew. Having been neither
stone nor its plummeting. Having been loved,
in love. Having been awake in the presence
of stone, of dew. Having been awakened by
love’s plummetless stones, kisses planted
on eyelids like grapes. Having been alive, awake
when love awoke, I can say I have fallen.
I really like this. Very nice.
Oh, this is superb.
The repetition in this — so lovely and lyrical. Beautiful!
I love this!
oh wow !! who will mind falling so
Thanks for all the kind words, gentle readers.
ROBERT! LOVE IT!!
GRACEFULLY
“I suppose no one now believes that jealousy is especially connected with erotic love. If he does, the behavior of children, employees, and domestic animals ought soon to undeceive him” C.S, Lewis
She’d not see the down side
of sixty again now.
A young girl of forty
complaining of wrinkles
raised the hair on her neck.
She wanted to slap her.
“Enjoy what you’ve got now,”
she longed to yell at her.
But the spirit within
whispered in her good ear,
“My dear–you should too.”
I love this poem. The title, the quote, the delicate touches like “good ear”–nice work.
(An aside: I’m really enjoying the quotes that people are findingf or these poems!)
Pam
thanks. I’m enjoying the quotes, too.
I never knew
“This is what I learned: that everybody is talented, original and has something important to say.”
- Brenda Ueland
Never knew when I put to use,
this thought i read
and its a wonder
I remembered too.
Asked him to write
and care not for reaction
had a faint feeling,
his words must be freed
and let take flight,
that ideas he never had
must some day see light,
and I see him today
miles ahead
spinning magic
and reality alike
with the same pen,
he never knew he had.
I must admit to returning to this poem several times. Each time, finding more with which to relate. I love your choice of quote, and your inspired take on it. Looking forward to more from you, Nimue.
that is so kind of you Marie ! I wrote this for a friend of mine whom I sort of introduced to poetry and who is an inspiration to me with his words !! And yes , i loved the quote too ..
“What kind of God would He be, if He did not hear the bangles ring on an ant’s wrist, as they move the earth in their sweet dance?” –Kabir
The Mystery of They
One ant mirrors a million ants. No ant walks alone.
Even a translation of Saint Kabir muddles the grammar:
“What kind of God would He be, if He did not hear
the bangles ring on an ant’s wrist,
as they move the earth in their sweet dance?”
What moves the earth? They move the earth. But bangles
are not beings; they don’t dance on their own.
Do ants? Do we? Does God? Or do all of these
mirror a million of their kin? Hearing that jangle,
one (if there is “one”) has to listen keenly
for the song: some hear melody,
but we–whoever we are–
hear harmony.
Pamela Murray Winters
Beautifully penned. Welcome back, Ms. Winters.
I like it
An America
“I was born an American; I live an American; I shall die an American.”
Daniel Webster
Thank You, Lord, for allowing me
To be born an American
Born into freedom
Born into liberty
“I was born an American”
Thank You, Lord, for allowing me
To live as an American
With freedom of choice
And freedom of thought
“I live an American”
And with Your blessing, Lord
I will die a free American
A nation I’ve loved
A nation I’ve served
“I shall die an American”
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“God bless America,
Land that I love,
Stand beside her and guide her
Thru the night with a light from above;
From the mountains, to the prairies,
To the oceans white with foam,
God bless America,
My home, sweet home.
God bless America,
My home, sweet home.”
Irving Berlin
Amen
.. and amen.
Is there a name for the opposite of an epigraph–the sort of quote that Earl uses at the end here?
123rd Street Alchemy
The blue-glass gin bottle you filled
with oil and herbs—not a love potion,
you said, more like a prayer for her
and her hair in the dark, the knock
of her ankle on yours in the night,
the paramedic you were for her in a dream,
and the muscles in your throat, her name
and fingers on your lips, the hitch
in her breath in the thin morning light,
and the long dark stain reaching blindly
down the stucco wall of the garage,
and the blue glass glittering in the dirt.
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Robert, you score points for the Lucy Van Pelt quote, and somehow your poem reminded me of lawyers, probably because I’m in the midst of a courtroom/crime novel.
Walt, my husband, who’s not a poetry aficionado, always enjoys when I read your poems to him, and today was no exception! Thanks for an offering of depth and humor. After that milestone birthday, I’m reminded of the guy who guesstimated his life span and filled a huge glass jar with marbles to approximate how many days he might have remaining.
Your Kiss
A compliment is like a kiss through a veil.”
Victor Hugo
A kiss pressed soft against my cheek,
a fleeting whisper, here, now gone,
as if it never happened. Yet still
I feel the magic of your touch,
it’s fragrance lingers on.
So long I waited, and you came,
gently as within a dream. Quietly
did you breath my name, bend low,
to press one kiss, soft, soft against my
cheek, ere you were gone.
Dunbar’s poem was the poem that got me to try writing poetry, back when I was nine. Thanks for giving me an excuse to give it homage, Robert…
How we learn
“We smile, but, O great Christ, our cries
To thee from tortured souls arise.” – Paul Dunbar “We wear the mask”
See his stick limbs; see
her swollen belly. Pray not
for our relief but
for theirs.
Wonderful, Ina. Good to see your work again.
Thank you Marie! Good to see yours too – I’ve missed being here and seeing yours’ and Walts’ happy banter especially
Just Drive
“You show me a woman who hasn’t fantasized getting in a car and leaving home and I’ll show you a woman who doesn’t drive.”
I might have been scarred by seeing Mama
jump in the blue ’64 Impala and drive away,
down Alabama Street, leaving me and Amy,
just five and seven, to look after the baby
who always cried.
As much as we wanted to run after her,
to stop her, hanging onto the car door
to prevent her escape, we knew better.
We had been left in charge, while she drove
and cried.
By the time Daddy came home from work,
we formed a solid front, not a word to him
about her abandonment, her absence no more
than the time it took to drive around the block
for a good cry.
Amy learned from her the simplest plan
for running away from home, wagging
her small suitcase out the front door, down
the sidewalk, around the corner and back
inside.
I sometimes feel Mama with me now, those
dark days when I feel so alone, even
with those I love most inside the house;
I grab my keys, head off without goodbyes
to take a ride.
Perfectly Nancy from title to final line. Your poetry tells stories that prick the heart … whether in humor or poignancy, but often both.
Nancy, when our two were small, as far as I ever got was to sit on the front porch and perhaps cry. Something similar to your story, but with more humor than horror, happened in last night’s episode of “Parenthood.” It’s tricky to find ways to defuse the emotional volatility of motherhood and yet keep the children’s security intact.
I love this poem Nancy. Do you know who the quote is from?
I do, Penny. I forgot to add it. The name’s on my desk at work (in my favorite quotations file!) I’ll add it tomorrow.
The quote was from Susan Sussman. I’m not sure where I found it. I’ve had it in my favorites file for years.
Been there, done that – each time lasting about half an hour before love and duty called me back.
I love it, Nancy. I remember when my mama got her driver’s license at 56 and hit the road, thus fulfilling her dreams of the past 30 years when her departures were cerebral. You’ve said it well here.
such simple tale , yet so everlasting effect .. stunning !
Very good! A feeling I can totally relate to.
FIXTURES
“Books are not made for furniture, but there is nothing else that so beautifully furnishes a house.” ~ Henry Ward Beecher
Oh, to rest in the comfort of softly billowing prose
Adorn with captured utterance
Feast at the table of God’s Word
love this.
Thanks J.lynn! Great seeing you and your wonderful words out here again!
Oh, Marie–this is a keeper. So beautiful, so brief, so completely stuffed full
Stuck in the Middle
“The only thing worse than being talked about is not being talked about.”—Oscar Wilde
The eldest child shines so bright
praise is naturally sent her way.
For everything she said and did
she was noticed every day.
The youngest with her cute pigtails
was always noticed or she wailed.
She wasn’t waiting for attention
She would grab it, or there’d be dissension.
But being stuck right in between
the beauty and the drama queen
made the middle one unseen.
She knew what number two did mean.
Awww, Shannon! <3
That was another Wilde quote I considered to use, but went with “I can resist anything but temptation“. Nice one, Shannon!
As a #2 myself, I’m right there. Great poem. – moskowitz
Tempest In A Cup
“I can resist anything but temptation,” said Wilde—
that was Oscar.
I start again today, I say,
tight grip on my resolve.
But what’s another cup—it hisses
Just another sip—it whispers.
Too much caffeine
is bad for me;
it lulls me like a harp,
you see.
It taints my teeth,
and my insides burn
from excessive
stomach acid.
But water just won’t do it.
And tea just doesn’t cut it.
You know your thirst could only be quenched
by nothing but dear, old me.
Alright! Okay! I’m in for now.
Just this, just once. A grande cup.
Make it iced, with Splenda and cream on the side.
And then I’m sure, I’d be done with him.
Whatever. If you say so. Absolutely!—my dear,
I’ll always be here for you, you know.
You will realize soon enough, I’m sure,
you can’t possibly live without me.
nicely portrayed. what I wouldn’t give to be able to consume caffeine again!
True worth – Shadorma
“Poor and content is rich, and rich enough” W Shakespeare, Othello
Contentment
is a state of mind
fervently
to be wished.
Worth far more than ecstasy
or first bloom of love.
To be content
was my ambition
throughout
my working life
now that I’ve found poetry,
gladness will persist.
Day 2 11-2-2011
Write an epigraph poem.
The essence of optimism is that it takes no account of the present, but it is a
source of inspiration, of vitality and hope where others have resigned; it
enables a man to hold his head high, to claim the future for himself and not to
abandon it to his enemy.
— Dietrich Bonhoeffer
The Others and Me
I have reason to be an optimist,
to look upon the Gulf’s sparkle and soak in the joy
of being alive, cherished, secure,
though I know all could collapse for me
and on me in one disastrous moment.
One sat in an oncologist’s office this morning,
taking the poison that might save her life.
Another has already endured all the treatments
and in the midst, survived her husband’s death.
A third nursed a sick and godly man through months
of heart problems and lymphoma, only to lose him.
Yet they’re more cheerful than I,
shaming my complaints before I can voice them.
No senseless optimism theirs–
they know, as I know, the Giver Who may choose
to allow all to be taken away,
yet leave us with the greatest gift–
His presence that soothes,
the lasting balm of Gilead.
Optimism…such a great mystery. Thanks for this poem.
Pam
very poignant–”shaming my compaints before I can voice them.”
Amen and amen
“The Rich get Richer”
Visions of a “City on a Hill” inspired the founders
Of the cities in our land. Lofty ideals circled their
Deliberations while those seeking personal wealth
Invited graft and other chicanery into the mix.
Dreams of money. Silver and gold, all for them-
Selves, and not a trace of guilt to trouble their minds.
A cold day in Hell is briefly warmed by laughter
Though the top brass lacks any sense of humor
While slyness lurks in their eyes. A mobile group
That is ready to move in any direction – flash the
Big bills and they are off to tempt another would-be
Empire builder who has yet to learn to be indiscreet.
What comes as a disaster for the common man can
Be a bonanza to those who hold the power.
I’m working (really I am), and a phrase in the paper I’m editing just prompted me to write. It’s not exactly an epigraph, but it’s kind of the same idea.
Fifty to One Hundred Million Human Infections
so perilous, this life thing, and so much of your armor
given to you at birth. So many sides on this die we call earth
and so few ways to influence the gamer’s roll.
It washes over me, this phrase, as I edit a paper
on dengue fever: “…fifty to one hundred million
human infections…” It catches in my eye. I twitch.
So much of everything, really, when you think about it.
People in the billions; imagine their eyelashes, imagine
the worlds of microbes on each lash. It’s enough
to make you drink, or weep, or surrender to some monochrome
ledger of limited information. It’s enough to make you
lay down and play dead. Imagine, instead,
the number of feathers on each of your wings. You can’t
count them, you can’t even see them, but you can
fan yourself, maybe enough for liftoff.
Pamela Murray Winters
Pamela, what an interesting topic and such an interesting way of approaching it – I love “Imagine , instead, / the number of feathers on each of your wings.” it’s a beautiful and yet tangible way of approaching our humanity.
Notes to Self
There is nothing you must be. There is nothing you must do. However, it helps to know that fire burns, and the earth gets wet when it rains. – Japanese Zen Scroll
Just breathe. – Faith Hill
In…Out…
Stop worrying. So much doesn’t matter.
Laugh much.
Forgiveness is free. Trust must be earned.
Hold loosely.
Be kind, always. Period.
Love fully.
Mercy is new every morning.
(Lather. Rinse. Repeat.)
Today is everything.
Seize it with both hands, whole heart.
Don’t play with matches.
Buy umbrella.
Nicely written. esp (Lather. Rinse. repeat.) – Moskowitz
Love this.
good one, De
The Weightiness of Life
by Richard-Merlin Atwater Nov. 2, 2011
“The first requisite of a good citizen in this Republic of ours is that he shall be able and willing to pull his weight.” President Theodore Roosevelt, New York–11 Nov. 1902
Life’s obligations hang upon us as a heavy weight,
Sometimes we must go out of our way to seek our fate.
A forward movement in ‘the uphill battle of life’
Oft times requires coordination of a man and wife
To raise their children in the proper sense and mode,
And teach them how to carry a heavy burden or load.
But in modern times the problem seems to hang around the waist,
With reckless, wanton care, the belly fat becomes OBESE, ex post haste!
And the weightier matters of life fall into disrepair as we begin to sink
Into oblivion on the couch with ‘a fat ass attitude’–so dull to think
Beyond the pundits TV commentary concerning problems of the day:
Thus the Presidential philosophers words are quoted thus in disarray!
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When we walk in the sun
Our shadows are like barges of silence. – Mark Strand (from Seven Poems- for Antonia)
I see a fat man
with a balloon
and think
dreamer.
when he purchases
three more
I think
stubborn.
when he floats
down the street
my pregnant girlfriend
pinches me.
I make the sign for food
my shadow
for the cotton guts
of a doll.
barton, i am intrigued and haunted by this. nice work.
I love this — the way it develops bit by bit through the stanzas. It makes me want to go out and buy a balloon — or a whole bunch of them.
NATIVITY
“Man’s main task in life is to give birth to himself.” ~ Erich Fromm
A heartbeat strong and sure,
pure and unadulterated; slated for great things
if only he’d assume his gift and lift it heavenward.
Words become him, but he struggles,
his message is saturated; inundated with self-doubt.
Tucked away like a cocoon, a swoon
of outrageous proportions. He succumbs
to the demons in residence, brought about
by said doubt and deprivation; a degradation.
But, still within, a heart beats strong and sure.
Confidence in short supply, he relies on
what his soul regurgitates and spews onto paper and page.
Sage advice he had once read. Man’s purpose –
his only purpose is to re-invent who he was meant to be.
The darkness lurches as sporadic contractions push him,
his tunnel vision shrouded in a murky mire,
and as synapses start to fire he sees the light,
at the end of the tunnel he is blinded by brilliance.
A gentle slap to a lifeless muse brings a gasp,
and he grasps for pencil and pad; a poet reborn.
well done Walt. I especially like the interior rhymes
space
(a shadorma)
I don’t want to be the filler, if the void is solely yours. – Alanis Morissette
I don’t want
any more empty
-ness; hearts pressed
to hollow
chest, breathing in silent will,
cold helium hope.
I especially like empty -ness; hearts pressed to hollow chest
Here is mine.. Day 2..
Change
“Fear not”
“In the confrontation between the stream
and the rock, the stream always wins
– not by strength but by perseverance.”
– H. Jackson Brown
in her golden cage
she exhales the
medieval moths—
(a lady must daily
varnish her cross)
unbraiding her dreams
one wing at a time,
one timid
aria upon aria
she sings of her sacrifice
then rises in
minuet and voice
vibrato and choice
enchanting,
uncoiling
revamping
gilded wires
into
melodious
harp strings
of valor and joy.
not sure I totally ‘get’ it, but really loved reading it. Re-read it out loud. Even better
Ingrates
“Sometimes you notice people not paying attention to what they’re good at.” – Brian Eno
Old Salieri knew this all too well,
fell patron saint of all who recognize
the mountaintops, but cannot climb so high.
It’s not the beauty that distresses. No,
indeed, for even in our rage we thrill
to witness such perfection in the flesh.
What fool could hate this thing we all profess
to love above all good? This siren art
on which our meager gifts have dashed their craft?
Our anger is reserved for God, who put
such dazzling treasure in ungrateful hands,
while envy blinds us to our proper worth.
Yep, he’s my patron saint. “all who recognize the mountaintops, but cannot climb so high.” Great one.
Chalk this one up as a “wow,” my friend.
Two Lessons, Too Late
“The way to get rid of temptation is to yield to it.” – Oscar Wilde
I knew it was wrong
when I did it
but I did it anyway
because she promised me
“no one will ever know.”
Being an ethical contortionist
I trusted my logic
and believed my rationale,
but when he called me
at my office
screaming
that he knew what I did,
where I lived
and that he was going
to shoot off my testicles
with his shotgun,
I learned two lessons:
first,
it is impossible
to talk your way out of
a problem with a party
unwilling to listen,
and
second,
never sleep with
another man’s wife,
schmuck.
A powerful lesson, well told! Gulp.
Love this line: “Being an ethical contortionist”
Had to suppress a laugh (a meeting was being held in my office).
I liked that bit too. Laughing, here. ^_^ Strange how the best jokes are always at someone else’s expense… hence the “Schmuck” is the perfect ending.
Talking your way out of that particular problem would be a real coup. Great humor!
“ethical contortionist”
*snickersnicker*
INTENTIONAL
“You’ve got to be very careful if you don’t know where you are going, because you might not get there.”
~ Yogi Berra
Flowers release seeds,
Promise for new life awaits;
Nature’s intention.
Oh, I LOVE this! And we both chose Yogi Berra quotes! Yay us!!
Thanks a bunch, Marie!! Yay indeed, very cool!
love Yogi Berra, and love having the chance to read your work again, Hannah.
That is so sweet of you. Thank you Penny! It’s nice to see you too!!
OPPOSING SUPPOSES
“Great minds have purpose; little minds have wishes”. ~ Washington Irving
Necessity and desire,
opposing fires in a thoughtful expression.
There is no obsession as large
as to work to vacate this world having given
all one could for the good of all humanity.
On a broader plane, great things can be accomplished.
Narrowness of mind, we find to be
full of “what’s in it for me” thinking.
A stinking selfishness; born of uselessness.
Wishing never makes it so. Wanting it satisfies no one.
But the need for a solution: a cure, an answer, a process
that professes a global fulfillment that could prevent
conflict as we know it, can be achieved if we don’t blow it.
Actions speak a language words cannot convey.
Everyone wishes for a better world,
but a great mind is the machine of intention.
Walt!!! Look at this coincidence! Intentions?! Cool timing too, 2:54! Love it smiles to you!
Very cool, you two!
I think that yesterday’s prompt is still inspiring me, as well!
“Quiet Gatherings” or “Hush, Jiminy’s sleeping”
“Good friends, good books, and a sleepy conscience: this is the ideal life.” – Mark Twain
“Hush, Jiminy Cricket, and sleep.
Haunting Lists and tolling electronic
Chimes will not wake you tonight
in your dreams of Order and
Efficiency and Punctuality.”
“You heard a creak? A spine
gently creasing? no matter.
There’s time for a read tonight,
I promise. Just one. That’s not
stack you see; your eyes tire.”
“Come out old friends!” I
whisper to the pages, “and huddle
under the blankets here. Keep
the flashlight near and we’ll talk,
but quiet, for Conscience is sleeping.”
Katie, this surely must be part of a book you are writing. SO endearing!
Thank you for your encouragement! The current unit I am teaching in my English class is all about fairy tales and allusions, I think I can’t get them out of my brain!
“Poetry and Hums aren’t things which you get, they’re things which get you. And all you can do is go where they can find you.” ~ Winnie the Pooh
Poetry and hums
Content to find and be found
Rich or penniless
I love this, Marie!!
There’s a lot here in few words. The Taoist wisdom of WT Pooh! I thought of Eeyore’s “3 in the morning with snow in my ears and nobody cares!” but who needs a whiner, ha!
Thanks, gals. Perhaps I should have used “happy” instead of “content.” Now I’m afraid someone will read it as “content” as in “contained in.” Then they’ll be going, “huh?”
Oh yeah, I see that now. I read it as you intended and went out to find and be found in the poem that writes itself in nature after reading yours.
“It was the best of times, it was the worst of times….” Charles Dickens
catch the bus, late again,
this is the live i wanted to live
got the degree to be a scholar
moved to the city to go farther
now I really miss the past
a tiny town lost on the map
got lots of money, stuff to do
miss the corn field and meadow, too
life is good, but not content
best of this, but not of that
correction on line two of my poem-
“this is the life i wanted to live..”
I read it the way you meant it, and I really like it.
My Ears Are Killing Me
“Listening looks easy, but it’s not simple. Every head is a world.”
— Cuban Proverb
cymbals echo in my ringing ears
a cacophony, a cry for clarity
!crash! permanent hearing loss
!ping! it might be a tumor, a tumor, a tumor
colliding my world suddenly
all thoughts and words go back to that
!crash! permanent hearing loss
!ping! it might be a tumor, a tumor, a tumor
November’s debut symphony
instead of music from my muse
my ears are killing me
wow, Laurie! I heard this as music. And the refrain as the echo effect some songs have, or like the way the last word of the loud speaker bounces around the ballpark. Hope it isn’t based on fact.
I love this one, Laurie. The repetition (echo echo echo) works so well.
COMPOSED
“Life is like music; it must be composed by ear, feeling and instinct, not by rule”. ~ Samuel Butler
Throw the handbook out the window,
it doesn’t even exist. No rule can dictate
what lies buries deeply within. The symphony
of existence becomes a cacophony
of a metered and melodic meander
through the movements we affect;
a direct and didactic work of art.
No instinct can be denied, for inside
lies the masterwork of The Master,
every note ingrained and paced only
by a loving heart and a feeling soul.
The music of life plays sweetly
toughing the strings that bind us together.
There is no mistaking its melody.
Love this prompt, Robert!
“I hope for nothing. I fear nothing.
I am free.”—Nikos Kazantzakis
wings outstretched
a hawk descends
into evening
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“He who laughs last, laughs best.”
—American proverb
he doesn’t move…
I don’t move…
old crow
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“All women become like their mothers.
That is their tragedy.
No man does. That’s his.”—Oscar Wilde
looking more like mother
every day…
baby spiders
Southern Louisiana Fishing Lesson
“I know it’s hard when you’re up to your armpits in alligators to remember you came here to drain the swamp.”—Ronald Reagan
As long and short calls of quails
turned into piping of crickets and frogs,
the stifling air cooled and wind whispered
through tall sugar cane grasses,
and the setting sun painted the pond pink,
featuring silhouettes of pecan trees,
Uncle Billy and I sat at the end of the pier
with an open tackle box at our feet.
From his wheelchair, his helpless arms in his lap,
his gravelly voice instructed me
on how to pierce the eye socket
of the bait fish with the barb of the hook,
while I squealed in disgust and protest.
While we waited with line in water,
he told me the story of Evangeline,
a fictional woman Longfellow immortalized
in an epic poem and became an icon
of Cajun culture. She lost her lover
during the Expulsion of the Acadians
in Canada. A gnarled oak in St. Martinville
bears a sign, “Evangeline Oak,”
the meeting place of the rumored
real couple, Emmeline and Luis.
And he told of the old alligator
that washed up into his pond
after Katrina. It took three of his friends,
a wire box trap and a raw chicken
to get him out and transfer him
to a home better suited in the swamp.
Which reminded him of his favorite quote,
“When you’re up to your armpits in alligators,
you forget about draining the swamp.”
Which led me to a quote of my own,
“When you’re up to your elbows in fish guts,
you forget about eating dinner.”
But I had to admit,
the trout, brim, and sackalay were quite tasty.
Oh, what a story … love this, Connie! And the quotes therein!
read through a lot of poetry (all good, ) to get to you, and as always, you were worth waiting for.
That Which We Love
by stu pidasso
2Nov2011
“May we be saved from evil thoughts and the deed of enemies of world peace who find pleasure in creating havoc and perpetrating all forms of carnage.” – Yahya Jammeh, “the pot” of Gambia
I saw the towers belching smoke
and the angels plummeting to their fate
victims of madmen’s vitriol and hate
who wish the world’s peoples to yoke
Daily, I read Mudville’s local rag
all the stories of extreme behavior
animals seeking innocents to savor
deviod of acknowledgment of white flag
Lusty beats and fast flowing works
describing the vocalists’ carnal desires
rhythmically, our children, it entwines and mires,
swayed to immoral actions by jerks
Even corporate America envisions
ever new ways to feed like vultures
using sex to destroy our cultures
in order to sell us their provisions
Gone are the tight knit local communities
where children can play without fear
of control freaks drawing near
constantly in search of opportunities
My bubble burst long ‘fore hence
punctured by onset of grim reality
of the American Dreams frailty
allowed by mean sitting on the fence
Live how you love and love how you live
and be willing to fight for what is right
for thieves slither hither every night
willing to take every inch we give
Plains Death Song
“Hoka Hey” ~ Crazy Horse
No one wants a frozen pig
or a charcoaled cow.
But in these moments
when the halo of the moon
smothers the plain
like crow’s breath,
- Who does not love
the crow’s snickering shadow? -
think of a man whose words collapse
like the encroaching winter
chill around the ashes of his farm.
Think of the running ponies.
Think of the snow owl
and the popping mouse
beneath the hammer of his eye.
Damn! Formatting problems!
Format or no, I loved it. Sharp images.
I relished this prompt, Robert.
Singularity
“Journeys end in lovers’ meeting,
every wise man’s son doth know.”
- William Shakespeare
They started to arrive years two or three ago,postbox-ed,
and inbox-ed, first in a trickle, and then in showers steady,
some in casings of embellished hard paper, some in Google bits;
bearers of news, that the next one, had taken the plunge.
Marital communiques signaled progression and joyous union, once,
of kith and kin, a day of forgotten vices, and innocent fun.
Oft now, these days of late, what but a stark reminder,
of moments too fleeting to hold, and a tyrannical ticking clock.
Endless nights unspent in an un-embrace with oneself,
Uncertainty festers best on a cold, rainy monsoon night,
in a room with no soul but one,and a singular wish to have someone;
a fervent prayer, to walk past quo of status, to that one.
However, the gregarious solar being, marches back to the horizon,
promiscuities of the night before with his dark, buxom damsels, leading to
endless ejaculations that caused the said festering, and the resultant
emotion, or lack thereof; he brings along his friend, hope.
The Seven Crowning Sonnets of Love
by Richard-Merlin Atwater posted Nov. 2, 2011
“How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.” Elizabeth Barrett Browning
“I am he that aspired to KNOW: and thou? I would love infinitely, and be loved! God is the perfect poet, Who in his person acts his own creations.” Robert Browning
It happened once upon a time, love befell my soul,
It snatched my spirit from within, took me by surprise,
Surrounded all my feelings and emotions, like a surreal bowl,
Rounded all about, but without any ‘set in place’ sides.
‘Twas quick to come and settle down upon my frame,
To envelope my inner being by disguise of romance designed,
To conjure up the thoughts of love by thought controlled,
All happened in this emotional stance began within my mind,
And thus I swooned, and sighed a breath that rolled
From out my chest and lungs of sweetness like perfume.
How could such feelings overcome, put me in a trance,
My mind, my spirit and my body, all within consumed,
By such and such an envelope of rapture to dance,
My only thought for action, seems my soul was doomed.
My ONLY thought of action, seems my soul was doomed
To repeat this “wonder of delight” that held me hostage,
It gripped my entire being with excitement of eternity groomed
To be an everlasting realization that love lasts as nostalgage,
A seeming homesickness for that of long ago, far away,
Yes, it took control of every measure of my being,
Thus I say: “How wonderful is love, Oh how wonderful!”
For that which is felt is far above just seeing.
For to see can be deceived, but to know—thunderful!
Like lightning in a storm that flashes ‘cross the sky,
Love comes so quick and sudden that I would surmise
It is the essence of faith, and hope, with rapture,
Faith of it to be reality, and hope as surprise!
Surprise of that which is to come and stay, capture.
Surprise of that which is to come and stay, capture
My heart, my thoughts, my soul in wonderment of forever,
For LOVE is a forever thing to know about, enrapture,
To feel eternity has meaning now beyond mere thought, endeavor
That when it comes you seek to bid it stay,
Sing, dance with laureled wreath of flowers ‘cross the brow,
In meadowed fields of pastoral glance that carry you away
To a dream-like vision of peace, and joy, and how
One might enjoy and feel and see heaven each day.
And this because of LOVE of God, and all mankind,
But more than this, exotic truth of sweet romance aright,
Of man for woman, and woman for man in love.
A conjugal embrace of mating, two as one entwined delight,
And all of this sent to you from heaven above.
And all of this sent to you from heaven above,
As angels seek to do the bidding of the Father,
To spread, as dew drops, all along the way, LOVE,
Which distilled upon the soul of those who seek, gather
In by self-control “the positive of life” and ban the negative,
Thus shall we not embrace the moment to give love,
Receive love, be in love, promote love, and live
In joy and happiness among relations and all friends, above
The fray of “ills of life”, tear the soul, give
Way towards doom of circumstance with hate, heaven yet forbid,
No war, no quarrel, no backbiting retribution from the soul
Of he, or she, who would be agents of peace,
And goodwill for all within our everyday circumference of goal
That leads to harmony of life as meant to be.
That leads to harmony of life as meant to be,
For those who LOVE in earnest truth of God’s desire,
HE hath said: “LOVE, as I have loved you.”–See
By this shall all men know that ye do conspire
As disciples indeed, if ye have LOVE one for another.
Therefore my good friend of life in time among us
Go forth with love within your heart, make it true
That what was said of old become reality of fuss
About the things of life for truth and righteousness, You
Can make a difference within the fold, change the world.
It all begins at home among the ones we love,
A father, mother, children, betwixt emotion of a FAMILY, Yes,
I do confess: love begins at home, hand-in-glove.
Why not start anew, give affection to your kin, Bless
Why not start anew, give affection to your kin, Bless
Their lives with love from the heart, show it forth
All you do and say by action, by words, dress
Your emotions with “the spirit of love”, all in worth
Of the individual you see, first your self, then me.
And others whom you chance to have within your life,
Husband, wife, kids around your hearth that seek to play,
Each day, show forth LOVE as divine, and banish strife,
If you do, love will come back to you, stay!
Stay within your home, and in your heart, forevermore,
And when you go out the door among your friends,
Keep a loving heart as if in brotherhood of truth,
Within the booth of time and circumstance, and make amends
Of rifts that might keep you aloof, be like Ruth.
Of rifts that might keep you aloof, be like Ruth
Be like Ruth of Bible days of yore who loved
Who set example, how it was meant to be, truth
Prevail and conquer unjust acts of wrong in thought, doved
By the Holy Ghost who distills upon thy soul– peace,
Love of life, and all within thy sphere of influence,
To be loved by you and me, meant to be,
That love should prevail, even as “the Master” did, confluence
Of one another into the river of life, to be,
Or not to be, one in thought, in harmony, Yes,
Go forth as one who knows the feeling of love,
“He who loves, it will be well with him.” You’ll
Learn to love by doing what love doth require above:
It happened once upon a time, love befell my soul.
“A.Y.C.E.”
“He fed his spirit with the bread of books.” ~Edwin Markham
Winding through the
Maze of aisles,
Books stream
Along the towering
Shelves. Running her
Fingers down the spines,
Stopping now and then to
Crack the cover for a
Taste, she piles her tray
High with Joyce to feed her
Mind, Dickens to keep her full, and
Austen to sweeten the meal. Her
Spirit sated on the bread of books.
I’m loving this!! Books give me joy, and so does this poem!! Thanks Nikki!
You’ve touched upon my very addiction, word-eating;->
Be Not Dismayed
You can’t wait for inspiration. You have to go after it with a club.
—Jack London
Overheard at a writer’s group
a few years ago:
“Oh, I can’t write
without
everything being
just so.
My desk must be clear
and my pencils all sharp
and the house must be
perfectly quiet.
No odd smells.
And the paper aligned
in precision with
all of Jupiter’s moons.”
(Okay, maybe not the moons
but the rest was pretty much
just as she said it.)
And then they looked at me
and asked:
“What do you need
before you can write?”
And I looked a bit blank,
I guess,
because they went on:
“You know, what needs to be
done first?
What rituals do you have?
And I answered, “Well,
I guess I need a computer
in front of me.
Or a pen and paper.”
“And that’s it?”
“Yes.”
And they were a little
bewildered
by my lack of
fragile
artistic
sensibility
and also
a little mad.
I almost picked the same quote! How funny! So glad I didn’t…you did it waaay more justice. Really enjoyed this
^_^ I was having trouble getting started, and then I saw the quote and remembered the writer’s group. LOL
I really enjoyed this too – congrats on capturing it so well!
Carolyn
Hahaha! “lack of fragile artistic sensibility,” eh? Love it!
Well, it seemed to be what the group was about (which is kind of why I don’t attend any more). I’d rather spend more time writing than explaining how delicate my muse is. LOL
Thumbs up!
I’m right there with you. In fact the more chaotic the better it is for me!
I think there are clones of this group all over the place. I love the Frost quote, “talking is a spigot in the yard and writing is a an upstairs faucet. Opening the first takes all the pressure off the other” I may be off a word or two, but that’s the gist of it.
Penny, I think you’re right. ^_^
a hay(na)ku:
” Dream On”
“The dream is a little hidden door in the innermost and most secret recess of the soul.” – C.G. Jung
Slipping
silently into
the space between.
this is lovely
“Sincere forgiveness isn’t colored with expectations that the other person apologize or change. Don’t worry whether or not they finally understand you. Love them and release them. Life feeds back truth to people it its own way and time.” Sara Paddison
Angler
I don’t know what it was that made me let it go.
Maybe it was the serene look you had on your face
as you held out each fly to me like a sacred offering,
extolling the virtues of catch and release.
I sat across from you at my childhood’s kitchen table,
you, as yet, in your father’s chair,
And there you were,
telling me all about the thrill
of seeing another’s face light up at his very first catch,
ever.
And that it was your fly that did it.
Not the guide’s.
Your fly, that you tied downstairs, hunched over the magnifying glass,
emulating nature with a trick from your box.
No small task.
And I listened with no expectation.
And realized for the first time that it was I
that bent the wire and knotted skeins
trying to net love like some kind of fish.
by Pam B.
BE STILL
“He says, ‘Be still, and know that I am God…’”
Psalm 46:10
a little rock
dropped in water
breaks the surface,
creating ripples
obscuring my vision
the tiniest pebble
in my shoe
breaks my gait,
and I limp along
complaining
slow down
be still
wait upon the Lord
and now…
His spirit has calmed
my heart;
time has calmed
the waters
the rock
can now be removed
from my shoe;
I can move forward
once again
2011-11-02
P. Wanken
Paula, this is just beautiful. And so truth. Such vivid images, and unearthed hope.
Make that “so TRUE.”
Thanks, De. I did end up changing “vision” to “reflection” on my blog version.
Oooo. I like that!
Great edit.
Amen, that.
ditto
Great imagery, Paula!
“Sincere forgiveness isn’t colored with expectations that the other person apologize or change. Don’t worry whether or not they finally understand you. Love them and release them. Life feeds back truth to people in its own way and time.” Sara Paddison
Angler
I don’t know what it was that made me let it go.
Maybe it was the serene look you had on your face
as you held out each fly to me like a sacred offering,
extolling the virtues of catch and release.
I sat across from you at my childhood’s kitchen table,
you, as yet, in your father’s chair,
And there you were,
telling me all about the thrill
of seeing another’s face light up at his very first catch,
ever.
And that it was your fly that did it.
Not the guide’s.
Your fly, that you tied downstairs, hunched over the magnifying glass,
emulating nature with a trick from your box.
No small task.
And I listened with no expectation.
And realized for the first time that it was I
that bent the wire and knotted skeins
trying to net love like some kind of fish.
by Pam B.
oops.
Born Old
“I want to know if I can live with what I know, and only that.” Albert Camus
That girl was old at fourteen,
her hair all split ends and fury,
her eyes outlined with kohl
that exaggerated her world weariness,
her eyes receding into the palest pained painted face.
At the group home where she lived, she parented the small
children, befriended the older girls, mature for her age.
In my class, she penned pleading letters to her relatives
during writing time, then tore them slowly into strips.
She told a boy complaining of his mother that
he was too stupid to live, but before I could call her to account,
she began to cry and said if she could live with her mother,
she’d kiss the woman’s feet every day.
A huge shy boy reached out his hand
and touched her shoulder and said he knew how that was.
No one spoke much after that. Instead, we wrote
about what was in our broken hearts, about how life
can come knotted and torn to us, how our own people can betray
the very love we bear them, and strangers can lift us up,
about good dogs and bad men and how it might be possible to live
on our own terms. We wrote and learned our own lessons that day.
I’d have sworn we all gained some hope that day, because I did,
But on her way out, she stopped to talk and told me,
“I don’t need to learn another thing in my life. I need to survive what I know.”
And she’d never heard of Albert Camus.
Heartwrenching and beautiful Jane.
Very moving. I worked as a tutor in a group home just after college where I met a few girls like this. Nicely done, Jane!
I had a name and face to go with your poem, too. Love it.
Going After It
You only live once, but if you do it right, once is enough.
—Mae West
Life is short, it’s very brief
I know this to my sorrow
I’ve known joy and I’ve known grief
and trouble enough to borrow.
Reach right out and grab your life
and seize the day with fervor.
Ignore the worries and the strife,
Don’t be an observer.
Live your life, is my advice,
and live it to the fullest.
Procrastination has a price
even for the dullest.
Time is short and valuable
so treasure every moment
Yes, we all are fallible
but that just makes time potent.
Dear Robert, I keep trying to comment on these lovely poems, but Word Press tells me I’m going too fast, to slow down, and then promptly deletes my carefully worded comment. Also, how do I get the prompts into my email as with all the other blogs I follow? It takes an age to get in, go into the search box, only to find it hasn’t been posted yet (late afternoon French time before it’s there).
I give up on the commenting – but I love you all!
ViV
ViV – I had that happen once, too…the “slow down” thingy. I realized that the whole page hadn’t loaded before I tried posting. So…the next time, I just waited for all the little ads and everything to completely load and had no problem. As for getting the prompt by email — I’d like to know that, too…so I’ll be back to see if there’s an answer. If I get to an answer before it’s posted here, I’ll email ya! ~ Paula
Viv – I think that when someone else is posting at the same time, the software can’t handle it either. Also, if the page hasn’t reloaded in a while, like when I’m reading a bunch of poems and decide to comment on one, there are more additions the page hasn’t caught up with yet. Sometimes I will reload the page before I click to comment, wait for it to load, then try the comment. If I do get the “you’re commenting too fast!” message, I press the back button, wait for it to load, press “Reply” again, and most of the time, the comment I was leaving is still there.
It is difficult getting used to this new format, though, isn’t it?
POSTCARD FROM THE BRIDGE OVER THE HUDSON
“I come more and more to the conclusion that wilderness, in America or anywhere else, is the only thing left that is worth saving.” – Edward Abbey
Cold as a nickel, the river flows silent,
carrying no cargo, scarce of fish.
There are no heavy barges with vital freight.
No Dutch explorer on deck marking a new map
or Mohican canoe bearing beads and fur.
It is left to its own—eagles circling,
shad gone, the salty brine thickening,
PCBs cling to shell and stone.
On the far side, the wharfs at Poughkeepsie are rotted
and when we walk down
the bridge steps to the convenience store
by the gas station, a teenager gets out of a car,
his eyes wild and flat as the river.
I like this a lot. It’s very thought provoking, and I mourn, too, for the lost Mohicans.
loved this – particularly the salty brine thickening and his eyes wild and flat as the river
so many wonderful words.. I must confess I had all but forgotten..
Remember- (a shadorma)
” Such a one do I remember, whom to look at was love. ”
~ Alfred Lord Tennyson
cabbage plants
half grown still bundled
forgotten
my great fear
a heaviness on my soul
pray remember me
Can I still post one for yesterday?
Patsy
“As a #2 Myself, I’m Right There.” ~ Buddah Moskowitz
For making the grade,
A Number 2 is needed.
(A fine point to make).
LOL!
This one is for Buddah and Shannon.
Love!!!!!
Ode: Allusions of Eternity
By Richard-Merlin Atwater posted Nov. 2, 2011
“Intimations of Immortality From Recollections of Early Childhood: Our birth is but a sleep and a forgetting: The Soul that rises with us, our life’s Star, Hath had elsewhere its setting, And cometh from afar: Not in entire forgetfulness, And not in utter nakedness, But trailing clouds of glory do we come From God, who is our home.” William Wordsworth (1807)
Holy Whisperings of the Everlasting from Recollections of the Spirit Within:
I
Sometime in the past when pasture, forest, and brooklet,
Terra firma, and all there is to see,
To me was apparent set,
Clothed in heavenly aura lea,
The wonder and the wholesomeness of a visionary couplet.
‘Tis not so as time hath passed on by;—
Regardless where I look,
Above, below, time took:
The apparitions of my mind
Have vanished as a sullen cry.
II
Kaleidoscopic view departs,
Rose-colored glasses imparts,
As Lunar light enraptures all
A silver ball floating in the air,
Reflecting lake: the stars above call
For pulchritudinous affair;
The rising sun gives birth;
Yet I surmise, to my surprise,
That something from the past of resplendency evades the earth.
III
Presently, as the warbler serenade a sweet melody,
And while the cosset ewe leaps
As to the drummer roll and fife peeps,
To my solitary mind thus came a contemplation of anguish:
An auspicious word brought a pensive towards liberation swish,
Thus I resume my fortitude, to be:
The waterfalls crash as cymbals from the drop;
Depart the heartache of my soul which time denies;
I perceive the iteration permeate the promontory rise,
The zephyr breeze approaches my meadows of dreams to prop,
And all the land is happy;
Shore and coast
Present themselves to boast,
And with the bosom of ‘yappy’
Dote every creature sappy;–
Thou Youth of Delight,
Gleeful about me, let me hear thy glee, thou joyous
Herdsman child!
IV
I have perceived the sound
I see Ye ‘all and sundry’ originate; I behold
Celestial seraph delight with you in exultations fold;
My bosom is gladsome at your round,
My brow’s investiture is bound,
The completeness of your happiness, I resound.
Oh wicked dawn! If I were beetle-browed
Whence Terrene herself charming,
This serene Spring flowering,
And the Young Ones mulling
All about, ubiquitously,
In a millennium of dells and vales, glens surreptitiously,
Nature’s sweet bouquets; whence Hyperion luminates tepid,
And the Infant wiggles upon his Maternal intrepid:–
I cognize, I cognize, with rapture I cognize!
But there’s a coniferous and evergreen Lineage, of many, one,
A lone Meadow which I have gazed upon,
Each of them bespeaks of something that is forlorn:
The Violet below my shoe
Doth the same story embue:
Wheresoever has gone the quixotic flash?
Where is yet, the splendor and the spirited dash?
V
Our appearance is but a dream and an amnesic stance:
Body. mind, and spirit rising up, our living Self,
Had its beginning elsewhere as a trance
Originates upon the supernal Elysian shelf:
Not completely in obliviousness,
And not in divulgate naked barreness,
But Swirling nebulous vapors of magnificence do we originate
From Heavenly Father, who is our God and fate:
Celestial throne was placed nearby to us in nascence genesis!
Clouds of ‘the house of tribulation’ begin to enshroud
Upon the full grown Man,
Yet he can see the light, and where it comes from, bowed
He beholds it in his pan;
The Adolescent, who daily distant farther from the Levantine
Must sojourn, yet remains the Authentic Augustine,
And through this medium of glorious wonder
Goes straight forward by himself asunder;
And soon the Grownup views to see it vanish from sight,
And subside into the luminescence shining bright.
VI
This Globe overflows her territory with gratifications;
Rewards she hath in her own authentic stance,
And, additionally included that of Maternal chance,
And no worthless qualifications,
The homespun Nanny doth everything possible, consult
To provide her Nourished-one, her Incarcerated Adult,
Draw blank remembrance of the wonders once known,
And that castle in the sky from whence we originate.
VII
Notice the Infant among his cradle and crib happiness,
Intuition’s numbered year as Sweetheart of miniature proportion
Look, whence amongst labor of his own pursuit he reclines in station,
Rant and rave over the foray of his maternal smoochiness,
With glance upon him from paternal look approbation!
Behold, at his dual base podium, some minor course of action
Some particle of his visionary mortal existence,
Formed by himself with futuristically-designed faction;
A betrothal or a jubilee,
A sadness or a burial fee;
And therefore now his contrition,
And entwined to what he formulates as tune:
Then shall he propose his language boon
To interlocution of management, endearment, or worried insistence,
But within a short time, so soon
Before this be cast away
And with fresh excitement and stay
The miniature Stageman strategize another act;
Overflowing occasionally his “amuzing platform” chime
With all the People, down through Father Time,
That Existence brings with her in her sublime;
As if his entire days employ
Was everlasting make believe joy.
VIII
You, whom outside appearance doth present
Thy Essence’s boundlessness;
You greatest Sage and Seeker, who still retains
Your lineage, your Sight among the sightless,
That, noiseless and quiet, ponder the infinite profound refrains,
Troubled eternally by the timeless thoughtfulness,–
Great Predictor! Diviner venerated!
In whom resides the truthful answers generated,
Which others seek to know to be blest,
At midnight evade, the midnightness of the tomb;
You, whereby your Eternalness
Ponders as the Age, a Flowered stem in Bloom,
An Existence that can not be misplaced;
Oh YOU little ONE, still marvelous in the sight
Of celestial beginnings agency on thy statured might,
Why with your fervent efforts do you agitate
Long time to place the absolute straights,
Therefore visionless with your hallowedness attrouble Within time your Reality shall claim her mortal weightness,
And tradition set upon you with a heaviness
Substantial as ice, and profound somewhat like a bubble!
IX
Oh sweetness, where in your fire
Resides the essence of life, fond,
Recalled by the natural lyre
Which was vagabond!
The feeling of our former time within doth bring forth
Continual prayerfullness: not certainly north
In behalf of the most likely to be praised–
Gladness and freedom, the basic catechism of worth
For Adolescence, either active or in repose,
With new beginnings expectation yet moving from within, close,
Not for all reviewed I propose
A ballad of gratefulness imposed;
But for the immovable ponderings
Of reason and exoteric matters rings,
The droppings of our things, departure brings;
Empty hesitations of the Person
Roving around in places unrecognized,
Nature Great presumptions before that our temporal Existence
Did shake like a culpable One surprised:
Except for those initial devotions,
Those nebulous reminiscings,
Which, were as they are to be,
Remain the watershed glow of what we see,
And the cardinal brilliance of everything known;
Sustain us, love, and has strength to create
Our boisterous time seem short in materialization
Of the long Quietude: realities that consumate,
To expire under no circumstance;
Which without nonchalant, nor wild struggle, chance,
Nor Adult, nor Child,
Nor all that remains against the mild,
Can completely remove and be defiled!
Therefore in a moment of quietude of feeling
When alone we solemnly stand
Our Beings retain remembrance of that far away eternal sand
That cast us forth reeling,
Is it possible time can move appealing,
And know the Created Ones play along the beach,
And surmise the ocean’s breakers crashing as we beseech.
X
Thus warble, ye feathered fowl, chirp, trill a happy melody!
And allow the youthful Ewes to leap
Like unto the drum and fife’s noise, peep!
Those of us who ponder will add to your sound,
Them which flute and those which romp
You who by your bosoms feeling now stomp
Palpate the joyfulness of pomp!
What as the brilliance was before effulgent light
Is now removed from my height,
Though naught whatsoever may return again
Of glory of the blade, of splendor of theflower’s den;
We shall not mourn, but gain
Power in experience of pain;
In the pre-mortal compassion
Which was forevermore fashioned;
In the mellow imaginations that rise
Out of mortal surprise;
In the belief that transcends demise,
In time that shows forth the pondering cries.
XI
And Oh, you Waterfalls, Pastures,Mountains, and Forests,
Presignify no departure of our loved ones, poorest!
For in my bosoms feelings I recognize your greatness;
I singly have given up a solitary fateness
To reside subjacent to your established control.
I adore the Streams which flow within their course as set,
Yet greater than the time I played gently as they;
The flawless luminescence of a beginning Way
Remains virtuous yet;
The Veil that assembles o’er the closing of the day
Causes a dim reflection for our view
That keeps a sentinel stance on life of man;
A new marathon to see, and more laurels to achieve as pay.
Gratefulness to the mortal feelings that moves us so,
Requite to its delicate finesse, its delights, its dreads,
To myself even the weed with seed that thrives below
Gives thoughts without tears in deep repose of our heads.
The Rant
“Remember, if I’m harsh,
it’s only because you’re doing it wrong!”
– Monica (Courtney Cox Arquette) on Friends
You’re as worthless
As a fake pocket on a pair of pants…
Except the pants at least cover my ass!
You no good piece of… filthy-haired boss’ daughter!
Are you freaking clueless,
You dim-witted,
gum-smacking,
Eye-rolling, slouching,
Marathon-texting, jeggings-wearing,
Pierced-nose, Marlbaro-Lite-smelling,
Snottier-than-thou, skinny-ass teenager?
This place smells like a Sunday morning
At the frat house!
I said ‘load all the copiers in the copy room’
Not ‘get loaded in the copy room!’
Craptastic, little girl!
What the Hell
am I going to tell your mother?
AWE
“Prose is about something, but
poetry is about what can’t be said.”
W.S. Merwin
dragonfly
green-winged body
slender enough
to perch
on a single
fescue blade
invisible there
but for black-wrap
tail-tip and stripes
revealing
presence beyond
jane penland hoover
Oh, what a pretty image!
Jane, you capture in both photo and word just exquisitely.
I Am 2,588,935,576
I am that single shadow standing
amongst shadows, owing my place
to this shimmer of light.
I am marked by it, gilded by it
with a number, and it holds me
like a bookmark in a lineage
of human population,
my numerical name,
my place in an ancient timeline,
and in the end I am as brief
as a breath amongst the other 7-billion.
PS: You can find your number in the timeline at http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-15391515
What a neat little piece!
Love this – it’s a perfect reflection of the population marker, makes it human and real. Would make a great “mudlark flash” piece at Mudlark http://www.unf.edu/mudlark/
Just a thought
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I Pick Me
“Be yourself! Everyone else is taken!” – Charles Schultz
Some Saras may enlighten
the world with brightness,
some may dance
on pointed toes;
others might change
our universe by channeling
their energies into our own.
This Sara is the only
one I know intimately,
and I value that comfort.
I like this a lot Sara – reflects very well how I feel too!
Carolyn
Thanks, Carolyn. I admit being puzzled over this prompt.
Nice piece, Sara!
Thanks, Nikki, I appreciate your words.
There is a price to pay for generosity
-for Carol and Reggie Sumner
“I can promise you, you’ll stay as beautiful, with dark hair and soft skin, forever.” – Todd Lewis
The soft earth covers us with
our eyes open and each throw
of dirt slowly silences our
voices, our hearing until the
the night sky disappears and
the only thing we can do is
curl closer to each other and
keep our hands clasped, as we
await the inevitable, try to
reconcile that this was all done
for the money in our savings. Soil
fills our lungs, makes breathing
unbearable, makes death seem
like a comfort. Everything now
slowly compresses, last racing
thoughts are of being shot by
my ex-husband, and how that death
would have been much easier for
me to bear than this.
Of course I had to look up Carol and Reggie Sumner. And what a tragic end for this little couple. At least they were together in the end.
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RECOLLECTIONS
“You never know when you’re making a memory”. ~ Rickie Lee Jones
A moment fleeting,
a glimpse at life one frame at a time.
The sublime and mundane
reunite to share that instance,
and then they move on.
Once upon a time, a wonderful story began,
an adventure that is embellished in every re-telling.
The locales change, the situations never stay the same.
But the main characters perform familiar feats.
Dreams never come scripted, and the subconscious mind
will find fodder for a fine fling. Everything changes;
but one thing is constant.Be vigilant;
for awareness breeds recognition.
The moment that stays with you becomes a part of your fabric.
It is the memory you have made one thread at a time.
In that one thought you become a part of your own history.
I think you grow wiser with each poem, Walt! Enjoyed this
Autumn
“Blessed are those who see through the eyes of a child” – Flavia
A carpet of coloured leaves
floats for a moment
as I kick my way down
the street, inhaling the
damp, fresh aroma.
The boisterous geese
dart across the sky
filling my ears with
staccato music that
echoes my footsteps.
Vibrant, rotund pumpkins
are scattered across the
landscape, waiting for
the night when their faces
emerge, brightly.
My username was backwards yesterday. I fixed it.
Anyway…on to some poeming.
Alchemical Desire
“Imagination is as vital to any advance in science as learning and precision are essential for starting points.”
-Percival Lowell
A pale glowing stone
hovering just out of reach
of the birds,
playing with the seven seas,
pulsing in slow motion
as the days pass
perfect in its asymmetry.
Someone thought the impossible:
“I want to touch it.”
Travelers in the sky
wandering in precision
amidst their twinkling brethren
rainbow banded jewels
who once seemed to us
like gods, governing
our nighttime musings.
Someone thought the impossible:
“I want to reach them.”
Visitors from afar
fire-tailed phoenixes
bringing gifts of panic, fear,
wonder, and awe,
diving towards the eternal flame
never failing to burn
and never failing to return.
Someone thought the impossible:
“I want a ride.”
Now,
we have touched
we have reached
we have ridden.
We have longed
deeply enough to imbue ourselves
with the power to transmute
dream into deed.
There is no turning back.
Staying Silent No Longer
“Much unhappiness has come into the world because of things left unsaid.”
Fyodor Dostoevsky
Do you find yourself cringing
As TV news flashes on the crowds
Occupying everywhere
So many people thronging
Together to protest
So many things – you can almost
Smell the sweat of the unwashed
And hear the rumblings
Of the discontented
Do you find yourself wishing
They would just disperse
Go back to their homes –
If they still have homes –
Just quiet down now,
Stop going on and on about
Whatever it is that’s got
Them all worked up …
Or do you find yourself
Stopping now and again
To listen, really listen
To try and figure out
What all the hoopla’s about
Why so many folks feel
The need to band together
In so many places
And speak up about
Their collective misery?
Either way, it makes
For, as Confucius would
Say, “interesting times”.
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Snowtober? Not quite.
“Human beings will line up for miles to buy a bucket of catastrophes, but don’t try selling sunshine and light – you’ll go broke.” – Chuck Jones
Board up your windows and fire up
your pancake grill to use all of
the eggs and bread you’ve purchased
for the long stretch of 24 hours that
you’ll be confined to your house.
Get ready for the flickering of lights.
They probably won’t go out entirely
but with your flashlights and your
arsenal of batteries, you’ll be prepared
for the onslaught of weather that the
television says is coming.
The rain is mixing with snow as you look
out your living room window and the
prediction of up to a five inch cover
has the entire area in a panic, but not you.
You have french toast and milk.
You have board games and a generator.
Once this all clears out, don’t forget to
start mapping out plans for the fallout shelter
in your basement. You never know when the
next faux-catastrophe is going to hit.
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“There’s the good dance, the bad dance and the next dance.” —Scott Wells
Nextness
Who will judge my wonderful dance,
my roster of publications,
my solid mastery of grace
putting my sugared-up scion
to bed with gentle insistence?
Yesterday, nightly hurricanes
found a stranger and I bending
each other’s ears for a legend
behind a cement wall, cupping
the last match without insurance.
Today we seem to be looking
for something pat as a doll house,
even one with Sharpie writing
on the walls; but what awaits us
time tells without an opinion.
Tomorrow’s just continuous,
so sleep, little family. Hush.
Delusions
We are all just prisoners here of our own device.
– lyrics to “Hotel California” by Eagles
Locked inside my mind are the poems and novels I will not write.
Locked inside my body is the playful child, agile and light.
Locked inside a dogma which has permeated me insidiously.
Locked into relationships, though they are lovely, they are not free.
Locked inside a lineage of no-good rascals, moonshiners, buccaneers.
Lost on my journey I am trapped, paralyzed within my fears.
Somewhere I am me, but I don’t know the way back home.
Within my lonely desperate heart, I roam.
I am lonely but not alone.
If this be my prison, may I have my crayons
so I can draw a special doorway to escape to faraway lands?
If this be my prison, can’t it have a patch of sand
and an ocean to whisper to me and remind me of my dreams?
I seem to remember things are seldom as they seem.
UP OR DOWN
“Are you really sure that a floor can’t also be a ceiling?” M.C. Escher
Today’s ground was yesterday’s goal
The center of the labyrinth starts the next journey
Someone is always ahead of me, behind me
In the conga line do I lead or follow?
The teacher learns, the student teaches
Reality is what we call it
Not where we are
Visionaries
We need men who can dream of things that never were.
John F. Kennedy (1917 – 1963)
Speech in Dublin, Ireland, June 28, 1963
What we need are people who will dream big.
Visionaries, men and women too,
working for the good of our society,
who live to make their lofty goals come true.
What we need to do is have great vision.
Dream it and then do it. Yes we can.
Imagine something brilliant. Make it happen,
for the good of every child, woman and man.
Close your eyes and feel your inner power.
Let the visions freely roam your mind.
Gather them within and do not loose touch.
New realities to search out, seek and find.
One day you’ll awake with newfound glory.
One day all your great dreams will come true.
Everyone has visionary powers.
Know that it is always up to you.
By Michael Grove
EARTHSHINE
I saw the new moon late yestereen
wi’ the auld moon in her arm.
- “Sir Patrick Spens”
Between this Old World with its broken treaties,
and men’s limbs shot off in war, and that New
World of greenstick promise not yet fractured,
rolls the sea away in moonlight. Each ship
a child’s toy tossed on phosphor waves. So many
moons since he sailed off for a new life.
She dreams spirit-lights, drowned sailors
breathing under the tide. Between two worlds,
the postage is too dear; a letter with its news
she can’t afford. Is he still alive? Tonight,
the new moon rocks the old moon in her arm.
A mother walks the shingle, up and down
the shoreline, watching for ship-lights
past the breakers – proof perhaps of life
on the other side. The new moon
cradles her son in the sickle of its arm.
Wonderful imagery! Really liked this piece!
“Feels Like…”
“We’re all in this together–by ourselves {Lily Tomlin}
when the room is quiet and the moon says goodnight
there is no one else, just us alone
We’re all in this together–by ourselves
when there are no more pages for life to write
no one else, just us alone
and who will hold our hand
When there are no more pages for life to write
and it’s our own whisper that we hear
who will hold our hand,
and console our loved one’s hearts
It’s our own whisper that we hear
when the room is quiet and the moon says goodnight
console our loved one’s heart
feels like…good-bye.
“Chemically speaking, chocolate really is the world’s perfect food.” -Michael Levine, nutrition researcher
My Bacteria Is Dying for a Hershey Bar : A Villanelle
Craving for chocolate scientists explain
lurks from deep in the gut
where bacteria reign.
Chocolate lovers, in the main,
seemingly, no matter what,
have an acid, glycine is its name.
But abstainers who refrain
have more taurine to strut
where bacteria colonies reign.
For chocolate lovers it is plain,
your HDL will take a cut
and a healthy number you’ll sustain.
Where the research leads is germane
to the intestines in your gut
where bacteria colonies reign.
Skip the chocolate, white and plain;
Come o’er to the dark side lickety-cut.
Craving for chocolate, scientists explain,
lurks deep in the gut where bacteria reign.
This is my first time participating. I think trying to read all the other great poems is much harder than writing a poem a day! Yikes.
The Perfect Cup
“If this is coffee, please bring me some tea; but if this is tea, please bring me some coffee.”
~Abraham Lincoln
I start my day with coffee,
Without it I don’t budge,
But when my husband makes it,
It tastes like bitter sludge.
I try the local café,
Still craving my first sip.
I spit it out without delay
With grounds upon my lip.
I contemplate the drive-thru
And my hands shake with dread.
I think I’ll hit the mini-mart
And buy a Coke instead.
Enjoyed this! Great rhythm with a punch of humor
Thanks Nikki! I don’t actually write humorous poems very often, which is weird since I’m pretty funny away from my paper and pen. I think I’ll give it a try a bit more often.
This is actually my very first epigraph. I found out I love telling stories in my poetry. Need to work a little on my imagery
Eternal Love
“The greatest thing you’ll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return”- Moulin Rouge
Life is sustained
Each beep, there’s a gasp
IV fills her veins
This moment may be her last
Eerie sounds of despair
Doubtful chatter from a nurse
Sorrow floods the air
As doctors converse
“It’s almost that time”
Her scaly hand quivers
Attempting to object
But her request runs down the river
Of her emotional neglect
Her fight has failed
Put down the rusty shield
Life is being derailed
And drowned in her internal tears
Beep….beep…beep
She close her eyes and sigh
This is the final leap
One last look at life
Her eyes open wide
Rush of peace fills her limbs
Her love came inside
With his cane and a grin
‘Get out’ he yells
All leaves in reply
A secret he must tell
As he lay by her side
“We’ll leave here together
Stay heart to heart
Our love is forever
Till death do us part”
It is on Random
“I am troubled as I salute the crocus.” – Frank O’hara.
nights walking my dog
that I sometimes see Deano’s Great Loneliness
following me again
or some of the sadness Tony once threw in the lake
waiting for me as I am careful not to let the steel door
to my apartment slam closed.
My neighbor’s heat kicks on
and I remember what it took to get to Philadelphia.
It was shortly after I tried to convince
Mary that the Spanish don’t believe in the Z sound
that she got more bad news from the doctor
and gave up on everything
and started taking the pills again.
Mary would call and fall asleep on the phone
and insist that, no, she hadn’t taken any pills today,
wasn’t even taking the pain pills anymore,
and I would tell her that she should come visit me in the Poconos
because I know of a place in the woods where people
go and stack their sadness on the sadness left there by others
and that my dog loves sadness, licks it right off
if he sees any of it on your face,
but she kept holding onto to her sadness and
and kept falling asleep on the phone
and pretty soon it started coming through the phone
and I thought more and more about drinking and calling her back,
and so I opened up Beloved and put some of my sadness in there
because I knew I would never go looking for it.
Mary still sometimes calls in the middle of the night
and I tell her I found a park in Philly with plenty of room for sadness
but when I stop talking no one is there.
Really liked this! So many phases I just loved! Great piece!
Thanks, Nikki! Also, Beloved is supposed to be in italics (Beloved). Forgot to transfer that over.
This is just so imaginative! And lovely! =)
Thanks so much, Jacqueline!
I
“I am soft sift
in an hourglass–”
Gerard Manley Hopkins
from “The Wreck of the Deutschland”
This single-lettered self
has been busy
coning on a contained
glass plane past sunsets
that once seemed much
farther apart, It is the
widening future
at the top,
funneling
into
narrowing
presents, shining
moments facet
as they fall, each
catching the light
and slowing into the years
of insects who cram lifetimes
between a single dawn and dusk.
This is so simple and beautiful – I love the Hopkins quote too and the way your style in this poem reflects his without imitating it.
Wedding Rehearsal
“It is what it is – if you cry, you cry.”
Jeni Roney
The rehearsal walk down the aisle didn’t go well.
Each time her father began the walk, he’d break down.
His son died six months before, the pain still so raw.
He felt the absence with each step he took. He prayed
for strength. His daughter had lost her brother,
she deserved a perfect day. He confided
“Jeni, I don’t think I can do this, I loose it every time.”
She held his hand, looked into his eyes, “Dad,
it is what it is. If you cry, you cry”. He felt
the freedom of those words. He walked down the aisle
with such pride in his daughter, wise and grown.
He began to live his life with these words in mind,
“it is what it” with the silent rejoinder, “if you cry, you cry.”
I should probably call this ‘day late, dollar short’ since it’s yesterday’s poem
Not ready
Not packed yet
No map
No directions
No guidebook
With phrases
For bathroom
Or railway
No menu
With pictures
So I am served
Bull’s balls
That float in
A sauce that says
Not ready?
You’re here.
Love this, Genevieve…..make too many plans, where’s the adventure? I’m there.
Toni
Peace
Lord, make me an instrument…
-St. Francis of Assisi
of the world so that I can teach
and fold compassion through
my hands:
wipe a tear, caress a cheek, ease
suffering and pain, and look
into my patient’s eyes and tell
him and her that there is hope
underneath the shriveled leaves
and petals on their windowsill.
Let me sow
paths that have not been sown
through raindrops on a young sapling
or rosary beads that have been worn
for years. Should I dare be God
and take every measure to save you
or would you want me to let you go
while I breathe in deep
and try to remember every crease
of your hands, face,
and memories of your children
and grandchildren?
It is not that you have received
so much care from me; it is that I have
received so much from you
in the many little ways you remind
me that forgiveness is a friend
and humility strengthens the core
of a person’s dignity. Because
with old age, money means little;
it is the pilgrimage for peace
that holds everything out of nothing.
Everything in the world conspired against me writing today. Work, toothache, kids, teachers the universe!!!! OK, that’s a little dramatic, but I finished today’s poem at my daughter’s martial arts class.
Odds Are
“Never tell me the odds!” – Hans Solo
Odds are, it won’t snow sugar this winter; but, what if it did?
Odds are, trees won’t rake up their dead leaves; but, what if they could?
Odds are Angels won’t sing Christmas carols this year;
but, you never know; it’s happened before.
Odds are, I will never do anything extraordinary with my life; but, I never listen to odds makers.
Downward Rough
“All the art of living lies in a fine mingling of letting go and holding on.”-Henry Ellis
Day by day we watched, your body, silent sorrow,
all the years of precious memories, subdued by silent sorrow;
Cell by cell deteriorating, gleaming eyes now glazed
Handyman of Music now playing silent sorrow,
Love, respect, songs by Ray Lynch surround your bedside,
uneaten snacks, vials and scotch, silent sorrow;
Revolving, never ending rack of medicines
we’ll help it down Dear Dad, silent sorrow;
Your golf course is waiting at Heaven’s Field
save a round for Teri, silent sorrow.
Grown
“I love you. You’re beautiful. I want you to walk.” - David Bowie
there was a time I
waited anxiously for you
to stand on your own
Nice.
At Your Service
“My heart is ever at your service.” William Shakespeare
Catch a shooting star.
Net the Pisces fish.
My heart is at your service…
forever, if you wish.
Pure love is the answer.
True love is the way.
My heart is at your service…
forever and a day.
Freely giving everything.
Live to share and care.
My heart is at your service…
Forever, if you dare.
This one has no locks.
Only working keys.
My heart is at your service…
forever, if you please.
By Michael Grove
Great quote, great poem.
Great quote. Nice weave of the line.
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“The cure for anything is salt water – sweat, tears, or the sea.”
–Isak Dinesen
Waves of Love
The boat slides
Through the waves
The sun lights a path
Before it sinks
Turning salt water
Into silver
My heart sings
Of joy, delight
And dolphins
Hum harmony
I love the sea
And the sea
Loves me
Sara, by far one of my favorite quotes. Ever. You did it great justice, my poetic friend.
Thank you very much De! You’re too kind
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November 2, 2011
Dreams for First Bell in C07
“If I read a book and it makes my whole body so cold no fire can warm me I know that is poetry. If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry. These are the only way I know it. Is there any other way?”
—Emily Dickinson
The Smartboard projects
a Billy Collins poem.
My request for a female volunteer
to read the poem is
met with groans
and “Why? Connor just read it!”
“It’s so nice to hear
a poem from both the male
and female voice,” I explain.
“Besides, poems need to be
heard more than once.”
Their looks say
it all: Yeah, right, Miss Person! But
they play along
nicely, and I sigh
internally, wishing I
could ignite their
passion for words.
As Chelsea reads the title
and then the first line,
I feel a slight chill
and look over at one of the guys
who shivers on what is
otherwise a warm day,
noting to myself, that’s odd.
By this point, she’s on the
second stanza, and the
goose bumps on another girl’s
arms command my attention.
Everywhere, students are
starting to put hoodies on
while discreetly trying
to stop their chattering teeth.
What is going on, I wonder
as the reader hits the third stanza
and the beauty of the lines rings out.
And then, I shudder in shock
as I look over
at Jimmie, self-proclaimed poetry hater,
and watch the top of his head
completely come off
just as Chelsea
finishes the poem,
tiny puffs of air
blowing out of her mouth
as she articulates
the last word.
Icicles drip from the ceiling,
and students
huddle to
warm themselves.
The APEs have
just met poetry in person.
My thanks to Mr. Collins.
by Valerie A. Person
Before any revisions, of course, but here is my run at Prompt 2.
The Digital Forever
“We ought never do wrong when people are looking” – Mark Twain
Oh my darling, oh my dear,
Don’t post pictures of your swilling beer.
Knowing that youth makes mistakes
And Gentleman were once rakes
Will not wipe clean the slate
Or banish away the crow on your plate.
Go set to private your profile
But it isn’t safe, not by a mile.
Cry, pout, or try to explain away
The foolishness of last night today
For each pixel posted, foppish or clever
Remains. The internet is the digital forever.
-Cory Funk
Poet
“Be like a postage stamp. Stick to one thing until you get there” – Josh Billings
got no kids, no DNA to leave behind, just words
starving, struggling to be heard
reading, submitting within means
squeezing 9-to-5 in between
or is it the other way around?
hush! don’t make a sound
I’m about to blow your mind
POET
“Be like a postage stamp. Stick to one thing until you get there” – Josh Billings
got no kids, no bits of me to leave behind, just words
starving, struggling to be heard
reading, submitting within means
squeezing 9-to-5 in between
or is it the other way around?
hush! don’t make a sound
I’m about to blow your mind
Wonderful! and beautifully written.
Hi All!
I’m a newbie participating in the PAD Challenge. I’ve been working on today’s prompt all day. I never wrote an epigraph so it was hard to choose one quote and concentrate on it. (I love quotes!) Not sure if I’ll post anything… to shy. However, I will check in to show my solidarity if that’s okay.
Laying It Out
“The most important things are the hardest things to say. They are the things you get ashamed of because words diminish your feelings – words shrink things that seem timeless when they are in your head to no more than living size when they are brought out.” – Stephen King
I
guess
it’s time
to lay out
my feelings without
regard for what others may feel.
In my head, my thoughts are justified and rational,
but said aloud, they sound petty,
like those of a child
who’s whining
“Life is
not
fair.”
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Fourth Quarter (a nonet)
” I began to think my time had come, as the saying is”
-Buffalo Bill
Fourth quarter, put me in the game, Coach
The whole season is on the line
Down by two, one minute left
Sprinting, juke, stop, sidestep
Split the double team
Give me the rock!
Angled shot
Fearless…
Win!
Sometimes I can’t poem until late at night around ten or eleven pm. So I feel like it’s crunch time “fourth quarter”, to get a poem in before midnight.
Have fun!
Happy poeming!
Peaceful Liberation
“Without the CCP there is no new China”
–Chinese Patriotic Song
They found the Lama Phutsong
On fire today
And they beat him
How dare he be ungrateful
How dare he challenge harmony
How dare he think there’s something better
They beat him, beat him until he cried out
Until they knew they had freed,
And reclaimed for the people his very last breath
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The Fifth Dentist
“Eighty percent of success in life is just showing up.” –Woody Allen
Four out of five dentists once recommended
That patients who chew gum should purchase [Brand Name].
I can’t help but wonder if six out of ten did
The opposite, five ditched, and one took the blame.
At The Lovely Feast
Are you havin’ fun yet?
-Unknown
Are you having fun yet?
At this lovely feast?
Sit back relax, release muse
Release that lovely beast
Rampant ramblings of mind, spirit, and heart
unshackled discharges perfected to an art
Kick back, relax, enjoy the feast
Try tasting a dish or two
But release that beastly beast
For in twenty eight days were through
“As a woman I have no country. As a woman my country is the whole world.” –Virginia Woolf
That you read my flesh all wrong
Does not make me a body of lies
You ignore my soft shape where blood and water
Make paint for rubs of primitive war upon cave walls
A generation drinks of me from leaves tender torn
Steeped in visceral heat that clouds what was clear
I leave a taste upon the tongue
Stumped on a title for this one!
Lovely poem!
Thanks, I enjoyed yours, too!
Over Our Heads
“Three feet above our heads, the air is thick with spirits.”
—Chinese proverb, cited in a catalog from novelty company Archie McPhee
I believe this, but my question is,
do we get to choose which ones?
If I have your grandpa, say,
and you have my mom, can we
(please) arrange a trade, perhaps
by waving our arms at each other,
in hopes our swapped spirits
will grab onto our created breezes
and catch a ride back home?
Or maybe home becomes
the strange person they now
float above; having done their best
with us in life, maybe now they
watch someone else for a change,
someone who is more apt to listen,
less apt to resist their guidance
than we were, that being the way
of life, to resist guiding forces.
Whoever is three feet above us,
if we inhale deeply enough
will they enter and live within us,
resting at the base of our spine?
Maybe another way to call them
is to raise our arms again
but hold them still so the spirits
can cling to us like dye on an egg,
rainbows in a puddle of oil.
The Four-Year-Old-Face-Of-Kaitlin Jones
“All the art of living lies in a fine mingling of letting go and holding on.” – Henry Ellis
To remember the flush of a cheek
laughter rippling as chimes
the air ruffled sundress
To hold on to mouldered flesh
the caw of a crow in the bare tree
cruel air that froze her
Between joyous sunlit memory
And heinous chill grief stunned
Lives life
Still….
really evocative – a chill and warmth a mingled brew
“killing two wolves won’t have an effect on the population as a whole”
the only thing between us and tyranny is bureaucracy.
you don’t want those official wheels to grind too fast
especially on illogical days when furlough cuts
the state paycheck a bit too tight at holiday time. thus:
“it’s only two wolves – it won’t affect the population
as a whole.” but what I want to know is “since when
is dead not dead?” and if it’s all true, then “why bother
with killing at all?” make up your mind! or wait, perhaps
it is. gather your troika and guns, boys, and be sure to
hang the wolf-loving B&B’s out for breakfast. thus -
if you have twenty fingers and toes, what happens
if you cut off two? will that hobbling gait be nothing
to you? or will you hang around for the lopping
of another two, another two, till you run out?
QUEST
“To be or not to be that is the question”. William Shakespeare
When should I ponder?
Or seek the truth?
Perhaps I should wander,
As I did in my youth!
And who makes this determination?
When do I answer this call?
Do I arrive at the station?
Or do I just stall?
To be . . . am I bold?
Or can I be still?
Will I not be when I’m old?
Would I cease if I’m ill?
Does this quest come and go?
Is it ever just clear?
Will I ever just know?
Can I land it right here?
Did Shakespeare ever question?
Where he stood on this stage?
Did his muse make the suggestion?
At an earlier age!
Did he know the answer?
So he wrote it in plays?
Which, made him a “Sir,”
Until his final days!
He seemed to laugh, cry,
And enjoy having fun!
A creative uniqueness I can’t deny . . .
Bard none!!
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PHOENIX: THE FALLEN RESURRECTED
“Vitality shows not only in the ability to persist, but in the ability to start over”. ~ F. Scott Fitzgerald
Down seemed so far from up,
and each disruption was a slippery rock.
Clocked in weeks of calendar pages
an outrageous trek for one so feted.
Hated and vilified, I still tried to rise above it,
but my mind kept shouting “Shove it!”
and I fell further into the hole of my own making,
taking longer than I wanted to extricate and save
myself from the ash heap of the forgotten.
A rotten way to spend my days battling reality
and the maladies of an over-active mind.
I find that the heart remained willing
but the mind kept filling pages with discord.
A poet, bored and disinterested, tried and tested,
but developmentally arrested and tired.
Oh so tired, he required more sleep than night could give
and staying alive to rise above it. A slow climb
where I’m putting one foot in front at a time,
continuing the rhyme which is my gift
and lifting me off the floor of despair.
It is there that I find direction,
a detection of what had taken me to the top.
Now, I feel a non-stop desire with no lapses.
These fired synapses working overtime
to right my mind and bring me back
on track to where I need to be.
I see that up isn’t a direction, but a feeling.
And I’m dealing with my beast.
The least of my worries as I hurry to right
a once bright and shining future,
suturing the tears and rising from the rubble.
Trouble has a way of kick starting your heart.
“You have to participate relentlessly in the manifestations of your own blessings”
- Elizabeth Gilbert
Your glass always sits
Half empty
And you stare at mine,
Half full,
With eyes of contempt
Your silence breathes the words
‘Why you?’
Why not?
Attitude sits quietly between us,
Separating us
Life is what you make it
How simple a concept
You fail to grasp
Broken
“Go to him, stay with him if you can, oh but be prepared to bleed” – Joni Mitchell
fragments of glass
scattered
across the floor
my reflection cast
a thousand times
why do we always do this
to each other?
Nine Innings
Baseball is continuous, like nothing else among American things…
– Donald Hall
1.
I will pick up the gauntlet, Donald,
and speak in nines, and talk of baseball,
and a life intertwined with that sport
so much so that to separate them
would be like ripping the red stitching
and letting the cowhide fall off.
You’d see a tightly wrapped core, a mile
of string, a cork center. I don’t want
to be peeled away so nakedly.
2.
Like you with your Red Sox, I’ve suffered
almost fifty years a Phillies fan,
the losses and the cellar-dwelling,
the occasional winning season.
Never a good player, not even
for Little League, I still loved to watch
my home team in gorgeous black-and-white,
as Jim Bunning blew the Mets away,
perfect game, Father’s Day ’64.
3.
But the other side of ‘64
is the Big Collapse. Six-and-a-half
games up with a week to play, and they
lose the pennant to the Cardinals.
My thirteen-year-old heart breaks, but not
for the last time. There will be girlfriends,
high school and college, which I survive
with some fair success, while my Phillies
flirt with mediocrity and worse.
4.
Seventy-three: at a stopgap job
in a men’s store, I wait on the Phils’
third baseman Cesar Tovar, on the
DL with a sprained thumb. Soon they will
replace him with some kid named Mike Schmidt.
The team begins to build itself up
to a contender, while my life builds
up with marriage, a child, a career.
But they lose three times in the playoffs.
5.
Vindication in 1980!
Their first-ever World Series title!
Schmidty, Lefty, Bull, Charlie Hustle,
Tug, Bowa, Maddox – all my heroes.
We celebrate in a bigger home,
two more boys on the way. I take my
oldest to his first game, but at five
the only thing that impresses him is
the Phillie Phanatic’s zany shtick.
6.
Another Series in ’83,
but this time we lose. Years of doldrums
follow, when we think that fashion is
big hair, big glasses, big shoulder pads.
I struggle to fight midlife crisis,
easy to catch as a common cold.
Ninety-three: rough bunch in the Series –
Schilling and Kruk, Dykstra and Daulton –
then Joe Carter homers off Williams.
7.
Donald, you still mourn your dear wife Jane,
she who would fall asleep by the fifth.
When my future wife took me to meet
my future father-in-law, she said,
Talk baseball – it will make you fast friends.
Summer evenings, we’d sit on the screened
back porch, Rolling Rock bottles in hand,
swatting intruder mosquitoes, as
gray TV light danced on our faces.
8.
When I was a kid, my grandmother
took me to Connie Mack Stadium.
She worked for Campbell Soup, who would have
company nights at the park. We watched
from the nosebleed seats – Richie Allen,
Johnny Callison, Tony Taylor –
or back at her house, the radio
issued the mellow voice of By Saam.
She was a Phillies fan to the end.
9.
They both would have loved the ’08 team,
the second championship. Howard,
Utley, Rollins , Hamels beat the Rays
after two days of rain. Donald, now
it’s the top of your ninth, and it’s my
seventh-inning stretch – kids grown, good wife
by my side. And I got to see this:
the final out, wild celebration,
Lidge on his knees, bear-hugged by Ruiz.
[This poem is in the style of a form used by Donald Hall, which I believe he invented: nine stanzas of nine lines each, and each line with nine syllables. I also used some of his conceits that appear in his poetry, like addressing a friend directly, and his frequent references to baseball.]
though not really interested in baseball
this poem brings a smile and an unintentional
response – the favorite poem I’ve read recently
and an idea of watching more next year
Inspirare
“Dum Spiro Spero” – Cicero
While I breathe, I hope.
And when in hoping, breathing
An inspiration.
THE JOKE’S ON YOU
“You want to make God laugh? Tell him your future plans.” ~ Woody Allen
God’s sense of humor?
If you doubt that He has one,
look in the mirror.
HUSH
“With infinite Affection — / And infiniter Care — / Her Golden finger on Her lip — / Wills Silence — Everywhere”—from “Nature — the Gentlest Mother is” by Emily Dickinson
Just before six, slip out of bed, dress
in the dark, and feel your way out the
front door. This is peace, cool air and
and the pinhole panorama of glittering
stars, the universe just a mass of
waiting clay in the quiet, whispering
like your mother did on those crisp
mornings “Rise and shine, my love,
it’s time to make the world again.”
And later, when the deadline screams
its soulless demand, you’ll have this
moment in your pocket, this perfect
hush to kiss away the ache and get
you through, or better, shape your
lips into a silent smile that baffles
every late-sleeper who rushes past
your desk.
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STORY OF RIVERS
When they set in motion the first beginning of speech, giving names,
their most pure and perfectly guarded secret was revealed through love
The Rig Veda , 10.71
(translated by Wendy Doniger O’Flaherty)
Vastness of the sky
expands his heart and
clears the fear
pooled in silence there;
cradled alongside
are doubts,
hundred muted questions -
is fire born in water
as lightning in a cloud ?
is earth born in water
as a golden embryo in deep ocean?
is speech born out of thought
as an action out of desire?
between fire and water,
between earth and ocean
flows a river of stories,
like love that marries word to thought.
The Terminator (a haiku)
“Come with me if you want to live.” – Kyle Reese
machines take over
Arnie is unstoppable –
the waitress stops him
The Magic Has Gone
“Put the bunny back in the box.” – Cameron Poe (Nicolas Cage in ‘Con Air’)
The illusion is over.
You fooled me
time and time again
with your clever tricks,
your sleight of hand,
your disappearing acts.
But now I’ve discovered
the secrets you held
close to your chest.
I’ve marked your cards,
broken free from your spell.
Never again
will you cut me in half.
And for What?
by Sue Atkins
“It is like paying out your whole fortune for a cow that has gone dry.” Mark Twain
Take advantage of every opportunity
Gather the tools, build a future
Night school, correspondence school,
Milkman, steel man, designer, chief
Provide for family
Insure, save, invest in life
Mortgage, piano and lessons,
Tuitions, cars, then grief as
Ruptured appendix screams tumors to a world
Waiting to take all
The time, the savings, the healthy
Life whose legacy of building
Lives in cold steel and warm loving hearts.
Pancakes
The smell of a pancake is a more powerful reason
for staying in this world than all the…supposedly lofty
conclusions for quitting it.
Lichtenberg (with my apologies)
There are days when
I’m so depressed and angry
that I want to drink
and smoke and take enough pills
to just get out of here.
My husband—
called Mr. Nego by his friends—
is snarky, prefacing everything I try with,
“You can’t do that.” I don’t
bring the keys fast enough,
he re-does all the knots I tie.
Yesterday I heard him mutter,
“I don’t need you.”
And, I hate this sad, edgy feeling
I have all the time, a sense
of uselessness and of always
being in the wrong place, that somehow
what I want—a private spot
to write or to have
a dog— is selfish.
But then on Sundays I wake up
to the smell of pancakes, coffee and
“I love to make you breakfast.”
GUTS
“Lovers don’t finally meet somewhere. They’re in each other all along.” – Rumi
It’s not as if there was some gaping hole,
like an intestine spilling through a flesh wound,
before you walked into my life.
But when you appeared
it’s as if you’d always been in my innards,
the guts stuffed inside me that I never thought twice about,
without me knowing it.
I saw Viv use this form yesterday. I love the shadorma.
Pamela
The Old Lady on the Corner
I am What I am
“This is only the beginning!”-V.S. Bryant
I am what I am
I am Virginia, I am Jenny, I am something, sometimes nothing
I am what many want to be
I am what everyone wants to hate
I am a force, I am a coward
I am a mother and sometimes a lover
I am dreamer, I am a conquers
I am a student, I am a struggler
I am envy, love, hate, passion, devotion, and pain
I am an icon and not a single person knows my name
I am muse and lately a writer that couldn’t write
I am greatful and selfish
I am blessed and lately a big mess
I am what I am
Virginia, Jenny, V.S. Bryant; these are my names
A mother, a daughter, a writer; some of my titles
The things that keeps my sane, on this crazy writers lane.
“If you don’t know where you are going, any road will get you there.” — Lewis Carroll
SIDE ROADS
Diners I’d never find
on the beaten path
Lost cities
of sausage gravy
Stopping by a farm
to ask directions
Discovering a colony
of six-toed cats
Cornfield dead end
that forces me out of the car
In time to be swallowed
by the August sunset
Sunset Escape
“I don’t know what you could say about a day in which you have seen four beautiful sunsets”
John Glen
Sun
settles
Sinks into another average night of not
Seeing the
Simple beauty of a
Sunset and you
Saw the earth rotate and savored the ride
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AMBITION
“Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow….” SHAKESPEARE
I will write that yesterday poem
I will and I will and I will.
Occupy Wall Street
“A Banker is a fellow who lends you his umbrella when the sun is shining,
but wants it back the minute it begins to rain.” Mark Twain
It began with mutterings, discontents,
voices inspired by Arab Spring, calls
heard round the world thanks to the press:
Tunisia, Egypt, Algeria, Yemen, Syria,
Jordan, Kuwait, Bahrain, Morocco, Libya.
As if it were de rigueur that we also rise –
we who pioneered successful uprising.
Wall Street. What better focus for dissents?
Recall the clichéd gist of “the bigger one falls
harder.” Thus was Wall Street chosen, I guess,
and as in the Middle East and in North Africa
the protests spread to cities across America –
Chicago, Omaha, San Francisco and, no surprise,
little ones like Ashland, Oregon or McAllen, Texas.
The diving line on graphs turned dollars to cents.
Savings, homes, middle class dissolved. It galls
me to think how fast most of us were in distress.
Banks called in loans, foreclosed. Bank of America,
Citibank, the other megabanks – each a gorilla,
fled via private plane to the White House. Cries
for money heard, they turned a profit. Not us.
Once those banks competed for us, spread tents,
big tops to tempt us with interest rates. Their halls
offered prizes to snag us. Current monetary mess –
means low interest, raised fees for us – a flotilla
of excuses gutting us, stuffing money in manila
folders for them. It seems Mark Twain was wise:
bankers take back their umbrellas when it rains.
Marian O’Brien Paul
Social Contract
“All Art Comes From a Sense of Outrage”
A thief has abducted America
And she has been taken apart and is locked
In the now – abandoned houses of Main Street.
Like on CSI, or America’s Most Wanted.
She is bruised and battered, close to death.
Some suspects are viciously obvious,
Others more hidden and even more innocuous.
The Bill of Rights has been reversed,
So the corporation has become the public,
And the public of America has been disappeared,
In basic rights, benefits, and in humane affairs,
While representatives stand with hands in pockets,
And I-phones to their ears to hear the latest instructions,
From the lobbyists, and the new Rockefellers and Vanderbilt’s.
Liberty’s true representation stands in the harbor,
Arm held high to welcome the broken nations,
Her arms now held high in a hold up -
In the senate, by pharmaceuticals, by the greed
Of those who can’t get enough at others expense,
While time is running out on America.
Glenn Close, actress
From Here to There
“I learn by going where I have to go.” ~ Theodore Roethke
Life is an adventure
and our travails are our tales to tell.
Places and faces we see become
a part of the story, and all the works
we do for the Greater Glory, shows
predominantly in what we take away
from our lives well lived. Each day away
is a lesson placed upon our plates.
It sates and elates us as we grow
in intellect and experience.
Getting there is only half the fun!
Turnin’ Loose All These Horses
by Juanita Lewison-Snyder
(“Some of us think it’s the holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it’s the letting go that does.” — Herman Hesse)
I’m turnin’ loose all these horses
let ‘em drag away these prison blues
‘cuz I’m tired of holding onto sorrow
and I’m tired of holding onto you.
There are battles not worth the paper
that it takes to sign the pain away
what was once love pure and simple
are now salt blocks of regret we lick all day.
There was once a time when we’d have
lain down our lives for one another
but now all these ponies know how to do
is crush and push and shove and smother.
I’m finally clear on all these feelings
we were never really meant to be
so I’m turnin’ loose all these horses
cuz I’m finally ready to set us free.
So now I’m turnin’ loose all these horses
let ‘em drag away these prison blues
cuz I’m tired of holding onto sorrow
and I’m tired of holding onto you.
© 2011 by Juanita Lewison-Snyder
“We do not remember days, we remember moments.
The richness of life lies in memories we have forgotten.”
Cesare Pavese The Burning Brand 1952
fifty eight years back
there was
a particular flower
of a particular blue
pinned to a particular jacket
on a particular day
joys all forgotten
and yet
when his forgotten she
calls with delphiniums and lupins
on this particular day
he sees echoes of blueness
he welcomes her gladly
and laughs
(Paganini Jones)
Plagues and Platitudes…
by JPS
“Money Isn’t Everything” -Unknown
We are always told, so young and bold
What we can imagine we can be
And are given a million platitudes
Like “the best things are for free”
But I must confess, I do contest
This so cruel a lie
Please ask Sophal of Siem Reap
How it feels to slowly die.
He believes in love, and what’s up above
All the things money cannot buy
He has a steady faith of where
We will end up when we die
The bottom line, not yet defined
Is his fiscal situation
Truth is, money is always the catch
In our living limitation
A bowl of rice, and never twice
Is all his “daily bread”
If only a child’s dreams and ambitions
Could keep more than our souls so fed
But we give instead of “green” and bread
A “wealth” of lengthy words
In our take-for-granted fashion
“Oh, money’s for the birds…”
We most insist on saying this:
“Everything I have I’ve earned,
I’m sorry for their troubles,
Its just lessons hard but learned”
The ignorance from your high horse comes
As little consolation
To a small, but world worn child
In need of such salvation
How can you decline to lend that dime
To one in need of so much more
I hope your naïve, pompous words and notions
Will feed you when YOU’RE poor
“Help me. Obi-Wan Kenobi, you’re my only hope.” Princess Leia in Star Wars
The time change didn’t help the depression that crushed
her skull. It became light at 6:15 AM, but darkness choked
her on the commute home at 5:15 PM. The headlights
blinded when she was most tired, the accounts from the day
still reeling in her head. When she left in the morning
the deer had not even stirred to cross her path. Such a pity
she spent decades crossing a sea of dawns that never woke
her before arriving at work. If only he had stayed to fuel her lust
with hard beacons of light. That would warm her, plus gloves.
URBAN COYOTES
“We couldn’t find an area in Chicago where there weren’t coyotes. They’ve learned to exploit all parts of their landscape.”—Ohio State University study, 2006.
Forty feet ahead, four low shadows slip
across the street in spaced intervals, proving
the mown lawns and the flickering screens
are permanent as jet contrails to these
quiet wild ones, who know the holes in
the fences, the thickets sprung among the
foreclosures and abandoned homes of the
warehoused elderly, who feed on the
excess piled at the curbs and endure without
monuments, mate without vows, sing
without words. I aim my $40 flashlight
into their wake but manage to catch
only pure darkness peering back, and I’m
too late to be sure or to follow.
Wedded
My reality needs imagination like a bulb needs a socket. My imagination needs reality like a blind man needs a cane. ― Tom Waits
My reality needs imagination like a bulb needs a socket
like lips need other lips like
the creek needs its burbling and how that sound has nothing
and everything to do with the moon and the cold, first cold
My reality needs imagination
like a pan needs hunger
a lookout, heartache
a table, the soft rain of convesation
a wall, its own impermanence
demolition or slow folding, impending
My reality needs imagination
like a body needs a context to float in
- sweet, clear –
suspended between what worlds
in whatever time is
My imagination needs reality like a blind man needs a cane
like the ranting desperate needs the morning songbird
and the sound of cars going by
and how that sound has nothing to do with liquored insight (connections and symbols too big yet wound too tight – constricting as the thought of a black hole, hungering) but exists because under it is a road that joins
another, always.
There are stop signs and that is good.
The sun shines on these roads, not as a simile, but as a golden ribbon
of how we get from here to there.
There is a here.
And a there.
My imagination needs that.
Without it it is a blotch and a smear
a frantic or quiet shimmering that needs
the crystal corner of a cup to land on and shine out
in a diamond shaped thrill of light so I can say,
“I see,” and know that I mean much more
by that
than that.
Unconditional
“I wish they would only take me as I am.” Van Gogh
The photo sits,
testament to something.
Her smile belies the pain -
The eyes show it, though.
Look!
Behind the deep green hue -
A sadness, a call to be seen
How could it be missed?
Fulfilment
“May you live all the days of your life” Jonathan Swift
Living life one day at a time is not enough
never give in to being neither a realist nor a fatalist
make your plans big
make your dreams bigger
live like you want a million tomorrows
strive to do everything you want to do
live to love yourself and your life
deny the moment and enjoy each second
while you spread your mind, heart and soul’s wings
far into the future
Iain
Precursors
“Behind every beautiful thing, there’s been some kind of pain.”
from “Not Dark Yet,” by Bob Dylan
Before there was love, there was guilt,
there was alcoholism littered about
an empty house in the form of beer cans
left like breadcrumbs to find his way
back to the futon. There was the frustration
only known by those who speak
the magic words stolen from sunset clouds,
having their chests cleaved open
with the unrequited silence.
There was the betrayal of a bottle of wine
smothered into the kisses of broken fists,
pounding against something immovable,
a freight train stopped by a butterfly.
Before there was love, there was anger,
there was rage, there was desperation,
a man clinging to the anchor
dropped from the Titanic, waiting
for either his breath to run out
or the sea to turn to vapor
if she would reveal the star inside her.
The next thing he knew,
it was raining, and he was weightless,
putting a ring on her finger.
Persevere!
“Just keep swimming”
~Dori, Finding Nemo
BEEP, BEEP, BEEP
Six thirty in the morning
Another day at school
Rushing to prepare for the day
Advanced Placement…
Bringggggg…
First bell starts
Students open books
Scratching furiously on their pads
Homework
Bang, shuffle, shuffle
Class is over
We scuffle through the halls
Drowning in the sea of immaturity
Sports
“Goaalllllllll!”
Game tied, crowds scream
My unsuccessful dive pains
Leaving bruised hip and twisted ankle
Perseverance
Thumpp
Two a.m.
I’m finally home
Bags drop at the door, waiting to begin again
Must we persevere?
Why do we keep on swimming?
Quiet Mouth, Loud Mind
“My mind to me a kingdom is,
Such present joys therein I find,
That it excels all other bliss.”
—Sir Edward Dyer
Shut-in
Antisocial
Doormat
No
You couldn’t be more wrong
Though I’ll admit myself makes good company
I’m just stuck with an excess
of imagination
When did introvert become a dirty word?
I wear my badge with pride
but go ahead
Take it away
Make me half of what I am
and see if you like me better
All That Matters
“Not everything that can be counted counts, and not everything that counts can be counted.”
– Albert Einstein
I count the stars in the early evening
(as they appear, one at a time, in the night sky)
or early in the morning, (as they surrender
one by one to the rising sun),
never attempting to tabulate the billions –
galaxies and nebula beyond my reckoning
I tally my years by the highs
and the lows: smiles, laughter and tears –
(everyone knows there’s no keeping score
of the millions – or more – of minutes between)
I number you among my boons;
of all of my blessings — you matter most
Playing Catchup with my postings.
My Mind Has a Mind of Its Own
“Don’t believe everything you think.” Maxine
My thoughts are jumbled
in a vat of confusion
I think therefore, I am…
My thoughts are misquoted
in a world of delusion
I think therefore, I am…
My thoughts are imaginary
in a world of illusion
I think therefore, I am…
A writer.
No Denying
“You are born into your family and your family is born into you. No returns, no exchanges” – Hannah from The Art of Mending by Elizabeth Berg
You can’t deny the physical
Dad’s nose, my big head
the freckles, large feet, that look
You can’t deny your childhood
the good, the bad, the ugly
The love that covered it all
You can’t deny the present
We are always here
Praying and waiting
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Look Away from the Light
“We are always getting ready to live but never living.” –Ralph Waldo Emerson
“Why wait even one more minute?” — Julie Greene
Dips flutters and twists
Attention! Don’t look at her!
Practice distraction
I’ll wait til she’s gone
Then i’ll find ‘right here, right now’
Irony twisting
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